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Old 08-20-09, 04:28 PM   #1
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3 new tracks, tell me what you think

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Old 08-20-09, 05:10 PM   #2
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i fux wit it it was alright..i was the last verse in hold u down and the second in boss ..tel me what u think


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Old 08-27-09, 12:40 PM   #3
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good choice on the beat. actually aint sing bad in hold you down. exept the song is about bein a player, not lovin a bitch haha. hear you last verse, flow was good at the biggining, maybe fall off a little bit, and could of gone more lines while it fades out, u end a little abrubt.
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boss. first dude has two dope lines, dont free style cuz i write good, and another, you came hot second too, but sometimes when you switch your flow u get off beat a little and then get back on though, shits still worth listenin to, pretty good shit. i'm mark schafer, imma add u up on myspace
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Old 11-20-09, 05:22 PM   #4
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-kind of like a big deal- not feeling your appoach to the beat not feeling the lyrics,no hate
-heartbreak collision-approaching the beat a littel better not feeling lyrics its alright
-stop that time- not feeling lyrics,not really feeling delivery no hate......
im asuming you recorded these along time ago though your newer shit is alot better..no hate
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Old 11-23-09, 05:02 PM   #5
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good choice on the beat. actually aint sing bad in hold you down. exept the song is about bein a player, not lovin a bitch haha. hear you last verse, flow was good at the biggining, maybe fall off a little bit, and could of gone more lines while it fades out, u end a little abrubt.
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boss. first dude has two dope lines, dont free style cuz i write good, and another, you came hot second too, but sometimes when you switch your flow u get off beat a little and then get back on though, shits still worth listenin to, pretty good shit. i'm mark schafer, imma add u up on myspace

i take it, this site is getting hacked into again? bet it has something to do with my name JP Morgan and me calling him the devil. NO JOKE i didnt type on my own track
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Old 11-24-09, 01:34 AM   #6
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yeah that happened to my myspace when i started talking about similar shit, i had to delete my profile and start a new one then a couple days later my internet and phone line were cut,acutally cut cuz of some constrution or something and during the time i didnt have the internet my profile was writing people,and it actaully fucked up shit between a girl that def had potential for me to marry....creepy shit.
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Old 11-26-09, 04:03 PM   #7
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yeah, i need to get an ak
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