Ok so it's week 2. You must drop a minumum of 16 lines and try and keep the amount of lines even ish.

If you are unsure about the rules then click here

You MUST pick a topic a topic from the following list, and you can both do different topics. Good luck and drop dope.

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Topics

Cleansed by Fire
In Anger... I am Truly Happy
Shards of a Broken Mind
These Shackes are my Freedom
Hope is a Tattered Flag
This Love is my Pain
Of Dust and Air
The King in Chains
Tears, Idle Tears
To Find God
The Moons Shadow
Risen to a New Low
Does the Solder Bleed as much as me?

Check. Hope is a Tattered Flag

*Lucky*-Glad 2 see u CHecked In Man

Rep AI well bro..

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Was he robbed of the ashphalt that cushioned his face?

i dont want to check in but i dont see if you are suppose to or not

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I feel like a puff of smoke in Nas's Broken Sky

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Was he robbed of the ashphalt that cushioned his face?

These shackles are my freedom and I can't leave this room
Because they misuse information on issues to address you
and I can't tell you why, see it's not that simple
because, really, its true...

The tyrants System is a lizard species with defiant little tricks
like making ciggarrettes to level the life span differences
They try and restrict kids that are turning into fools
by brainwashing their votes into our learning institutes
issues concerning distant groups only slow from warfare
The constitution is kept for the president to blow his nose there
homeland security says they aint supportin our health
Because We're so busy being at war with ourselfs
we're not financially stable. Feel the ease and cancel all things
like radios and cellies 'cause their frequencies are cancer causing
They fiend control; so the stock market bred their future
and whenever they need money they sell or spread a rumor
its just to appear stunning; like modern medicine
trying to breakdown immunities and alter skeletons
They call us hellions but can't tell when somethings wrong
giving us catscans to provide lists of the drugs we've done
rebellious music batons in their closet to make a hatred seeded
Then they'll pull the plug so it feels like they relieved it
what if they concieved a super race
to protect our stupid nation before we were due replaced
Wouldn't that be the end-all/Kill-all?
And to think it'd be beause they dont defend our real laws
It makes me laugh like the idea you're stronger in numbers;
which ironically is why wyclef is gone till november
They say to listen 'cause they've got it organized
You believe it, and whats worse is how you horde their side
were you not born with pride? or does TV have u hypnotized
Cops were quitting until tax dollars became instant bribes
but the worst is ya'll agree to stop this tom foolery
yet you work everyday to continue your community

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I feel like a puff of smoke in Nas's Broken Sky

good battle, bothe had their writings down..... Unreal had plenty of multis, us good vocab and hit the point rite on the head. Pent up was more deep, he had a good flow and a nice message behind it. This was another hard one to judge.... I like how this league is steppin their game up. Pent up, had a lil more imagery and metaphors..... aq bit longer, so he was able to express himself a lil better.... I'mma have to give this one to Unreal...... winner- I Am Unreal

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Lyrical Rapsody

^...lol.......... you almost made it sound like you wanted to vote for pent up...?

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Was he robbed of the ashphalt that cushioned his face?

glad unreal knows whats real lol

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I feel like a puff of smoke in Nas's Broken Sky

Pent this my dawg unreal he the SHIT man so dont get it twisted....

ok this battle was great both came string and very well balanced in vocab and flow and depth of emotion.


ok pent yes you had somewhat of a rhymescheme but at some point your really fell of and your opener and closer were both bad...but i felt you had emoion and vocab and proffesional develpment of delivery and creative writting.

7/10

unreal you came well nice opener but closer was meh...your verse was nicely complexed and creative aswell but your emotion it fel justa little but you picked it up later as you went along so word up to that!

7.5/10

ok i vote real but this aint for reasons on him being my homie i just felt he had a better and more all around better verse.

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