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Old 02-10-09, 08:53 PM   #1
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yo yo yo, now everybody check out my one life to live track!

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this is defo not the final mix, im actually not even mixing the final version, this is just the teaser pre-mix to get a feel of what we wunna do with the mix...ive sent the accapellas out to the producer to get it all mixed and masterd along with the beat, cuz duh if you cant tell this is also a compressed version of the beat.....but leave feed tell me you love it, tell me you hate it, tell me its too repeatative, and tell me that repatation makes it dopeeeeeeeeeeee


haha i just wanted to steal past tenses thunder with my one life to live track

ONE LIFE TO LIFE - http://www.zshare.net/audio/55425961a70cd0b5/

oh and the end the producer was planning on doing something weird with the beat, n shit wanted me to stop there....but word LEAVE FEED
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Old 02-11-09, 03:08 AM   #2
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listening wack beat,mixing sounds good, lyrics are decent dope ass hook and intro to hook second verse is fuckin sick,i like how u rode the beat to,overall sick drop u saved the beat
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Old 02-11-09, 03:27 AM   #3
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286 is easily the sickest rapper on RV.
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Old 02-11-09, 07:59 AM   #4
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The beat reminded me of that Apologize beat.

Flow as good, and the quality was nice fam. This was good.
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Old 02-11-09, 01:43 PM   #5
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286 has cancer?
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Old 02-12-09, 12:09 AM   #6
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haha i jus think its so funny how PT just posted up his song about this too. ima get on that acoustic project soon. good stuff. sounds like linkin park. sorry.
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Old 02-12-09, 12:22 AM   #7
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Ya i thought it sounded like linkin park the hook went hard bra lyrics were decent i think you could have made a tight as song for the title but it was overall a hot project good shit.
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Old 02-12-09, 10:43 AM   #8
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i wrote it for a movie so it serves its purpose up emensly....wouldnt go on a cd prolly...but yea i only posted it cuz pt's one life to live i wanted to steal the spotlight/be a dick....word tho thanks for the love yall
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 02-12-09, 10:53 AM   #9
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lol sick now do my verse
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