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Old 06-09-06, 05:59 PM   #1
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The Hand that Helped me Fall
Only For the Righteous
Tears of the Dead
Just a dream...
The Shadow Behind Me
The Last Mile
Circle of Time
Sentenced to Love
Blooded Placement
As the Dawn Fades
Through the Glass
Of Hate and Love
My Sirens Mourn
Farewell...
The Blade that wouldn't Cut
A River Called Life

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Old 06-10-06, 12:15 AM   #2
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Um I think we should be able to choose our own topics from the list, instead of agreeing ONE. Uh anyways, Check.

Appo: You can now do your own topic. Thank you for the suggestion, I was wondering if people would be unhappy about sharing a topic. Good luck!


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Old 06-10-06, 04:02 AM   #3
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Old 06-16-06, 11:54 PM   #4
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Tears of the Dead


When I met you, I thought you was someone special,
different from others- A diamond, that holds a crystal
of personality and inside those layers a deph of care,
but I was fooled and didn't realize in your eyes- U stare
down in me releasing pain and envy- catching ur cancer.
Shaking up my emotions lyke and exotic strip dancer,
my mind stuck in the jungle and my screams is a sweet melody
to your ears like the birds that sits ontop of the branches tree's
calling thier love ones, but my love won't come today. Nope.
The loins in me is drinking out of the pond of my soul-I'm losing hope.
I thought you knew what a real women is worth- I gave u the keys,
entered in my home-my own blood messing up my own sheets.
Now you feel my envy,
now your not happy,
tears of yours no long mean nothing to me,
I'm dead and your dead too. R.I.P.
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*

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Old 06-17-06, 04:30 PM   #5
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Well, I guess its a no show cause Valor signed out. Can I get some feedback?
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ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life.
Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8
ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do.
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u
Smartone Freal:
ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol
Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private
ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged*
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Old 06-19-06, 01:05 PM   #6
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