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05-10-07, 03:05 PM
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NEW HOTTNESS!!!!!"ANOTHER CALI SUMMER" CHECK IT OUT
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Another Cali Summer
lo-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=5329010&q=lo hi-fi URL: http://www.soundclick.com/util/getp...id=5329010&q=hi BEAT=SOUL THEORY HOOK=ENSTINCTZ VERSES=ENSTINCTZ ENJOY THIS SHIT =1= I LEFT FEEDBACK ON: http://community.rapverse.com/showp...128&postcount=2 http://community.rapverse.com/showp...127&postcount=9 |
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05-10-07, 04:38 PM
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i like the adlibs in the hook but the hook felt a lil fast for the beat....maybe too hype i unno, need to be more lax....this whole joint seems a lil rushed for the beat...i like what your sayin but how you say it with this particualr beat it just doesnt fit....not much else i can say abuot the song except that with a diff beat, or a diff way of spitting it on this beat it would be pretty damn hot.....
rtf on Good morning
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05-11-07, 10:37 AM
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Hook
Shits tight, could picture smokin a blunt to this First Verse Smoke a blunt to this again....Flow is on point except for a few rushed bars..... Lyrics and delivery fit the tracc well....You defiantely got a nice ass west coast swagg Second Verse This shit takes me bacc....reminds me of bumpin snoop dawg and sippin on the 40 outside my homies SUV downtown n shit..... Flow is more on point on this one, no slip ups or nuttin......lyrics is tight tho, creates a picture homie Good Shit Keep makin the traccz....
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