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Old 04-19-05, 12:05 AM   #1
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Is this why we love rap music?(please dont read!!!)

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This is just a quck peice I wrote.

Just a drop about someone breaking intot he rap industry in two double owe 5
Hate it or love it.... couldnt give two fucks!



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nutured by the music,seldom in your expression and voice
allways willing to be suddle,mastered your craft of choice
using it for a hobbie,strickly for your own desire
never afraid to test you ability,maximum lyrics down to the wire
being in control of how others view your expression
say what you want to who you want,no advise of discression
pleasure rather than pain,wrtiting music is listed in your resume's
money isnt why you do it,simply to be expressing your views of these days
saturated by downpours or alcoholic beverages makes more fun than desired
still young,wise,loving the music,cant ever understand why others retired
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learnt that cool edit can elevate your creativity,teach about production
mixtaped minds,suffixed datelines and his hate reclines like induction
grow a hunger for beats like a fiend for some crack
learnt that you have a talent after you hear yourself on a track
joke and laugh about making it big one day in the game
from this moment on your life will never be the same
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Daily work ethic starts to evolve,gotta start from the bottom to reach the top
your peers cant understand why you daily preach hip hop
everything in your day is an influence to a line in your rhyme book
quick resolution and relisation on how much wasted time crime took
never got you anywere,its your artform that will bring you closer
as you fuck wid cool edit,you relise you need to get some exposure
But money is vital in this desire you now have to circumnavigate your interest
gotta use your time wise ,tracks have to be perfect for a record company to invest
laying down track after track,but quality isnt as good as you wish
money is a nessecity,but you need to buy your next dish
saving your cash for the next step in equipment
But its made by an overseas company,so the price is double for shipment
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heart racing,you need to find a set that reclines
feeling like your bout to blow like honda that redlines
mangaer just told you the news,your first song to reach the charts
overwellemd with joy,failng to relise that this is were the drama starts
your sitting comfortably at number twelve,just above someone nameless to you
belif isnt there,suprised that your actually the most famous in crew
your ego starts to rise,despise your critics you feel un-deniably great
you start to plot ideas,unaware you label has decided your fate
they tell you to make a song,give you the topic the beat saying "you need airtime"
..you turn your back walk away....damn this is no longer the rap i done in my spare time!!

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Would of made it longer and more indepth, but rapverse has alot of lazy fucks on it who cant be fucked reading some dope real shit.

So yeh,say what the fuck you want Im proberly not gonna take any of it into consideration.

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Old 04-19-05, 01:32 PM   #2
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Old 04-19-05, 06:42 PM   #3
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Well, personally I liked this one.. I could give you a few pointers but since you dont want anyones advice id just shut my trap..
Well, overall.. 7/10
Keep this shit comin..
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Old 04-20-05, 08:26 AM   #4
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Old 04-20-05, 04:07 PM   #5
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Old 04-21-05, 03:37 AM   #6
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Old 04-23-05, 08:32 AM   #7
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Old 04-23-05, 11:28 AM   #8
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nice drop fam, was feelin a couple bars
that were perdy nice.......tc reppin.........
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Old 04-23-05, 06:16 PM   #9
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yeh you know Tc stay holding it down.
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