Inevitable..


ya always several levels below me, fearin it while you hearin it/
im always seein continuous BLOOD LOSS but no periods. im serious/
ima search for centuries, cuz eventually ima hafta find true meaning potentially/
see my badest vernacular acrobatics'll elevate tha bar-graphic status/
at tha same time make it breath taking so you loose ya breathing apparatus/
imagine my unimaginative class of classics at last im drastic/
most text enormous wit vocals blastin, til my performance is considered classic/
too much death then why tha hell get rid of plastic?/ *zipper zips*
this peice is glory, an nasty this here gon' stay wit you forever like perminant TATOOS/
my peices'll leave ya soul stiff as stone statues/
bullets will attack you in tha frame that ya arms are attached to!/ DAMN! (chest)
left wita corspe perfect that casket will match you/ am i...
Authentic, or artistic? call it what you want im terrific, sadistic, minds twisted/
high an lifted, im gifted this is like my life, i gott no problem to risk it/
I perform my art form most exquisite this dose is vicious/
ya sights are jus as practical as a ghost you witnessed/
jus visualize life and death defined through fate, wonder if theres really a difference/
what you see as impossible I clearly picture as clear as crystal/
so tha image you get is a pussy grown years wita fear of pistols/ *clik clik*
my only obligation in relation to hatin is that sensation i get when
i loose all my paitence an sweat/ go to war then tha whole nations in debt/
my whole creation a threat, tired of fake niggas claim every location they rep/ <-- HAHA
they say times change, im verbally sick in tha brain/
plus in ways im partly insane, yo why is it always tha same/
my muscles ache i've been workin out these problems i gained/
fuck does a real hustle take? i'll tell you, its take alot balls no
pussies or fakes/ but you pussies'll prolly take tha quickest route to tha jakes/
inevitable its incredible how i let it go, ambulances come for tha medical/
at times theorectical, i'm unforgetable, no forgettin this, im gettin pissed/
got ya'll simply sweatin this, before i go heres a lesson snitch, i got weapons bitch!/ < DAMN!
finger on tha trigger dont let me twitch...im still here, still doin it, still an ill nigga, im still
a General, still got much more heat, you stay sayin tha same shit like you was stuck on repeat/
so tell me now what tha fuck is elite!/

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damn ya'll sleep too much c'mon

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^^^ Uppin...

Not bad man, here's the pros and cons...
Yo, let's see, the vocab u use is pretty strong, and you had a descent amont of good rhymes...
Your flow wasn't all that thought, it didn't have to much rhythm to it, at some points it did, but then it got a bit choppy, on and off, and your topic, while not played out, isn't anything new...
I mean this piece ain't too impressive... but it ain't bad at all...
You got skill man, I think so...

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good looks

*mumbles*

make up new rhymes? if you hate eminem? listen to his albums no matter what and get ideas? or else make up some lie that you have other influences... when you don't?

or else just think that i said the same thing Alias-C said but with a lot less mispelt words


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