Is this for female MC's? The idea seems a little feminine...

Anyway, overall it looks nice and unified.

I like the way the cool broken heart thing blends out to some trippy patterns towards the edge.

But I think the main text and those other texts should not have been all distorted looking. Unless you put on big outline around them and made the letter closer together while that outline blended well with the BG pattern... Right now it looks all random and make me not want to read it.

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