check.......... 12?

Check.

Is it due this monday as in today. I just seen this.

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

Yes, its been up since Thursday. If you need a 1 day extension though I'm sure your opponent will be fine with that.

yea im fine with that cuz Ima need an extention 2 cuz some shit just came up for me..

i hope i did this right lol. 1st week.


U got the uniform, but personally i don't think the crowd fits dude
Behind bars bandaged up lined and scarred, cuz a dog OUT DID you
U got the cap on, But ya rottin away in jail cuz ya lifes dull
Completely stuck in the dark with ideas and still NO light bulb
six, three, one, one, two, eight.
Thats already too many numbers for ya, ya Can't think on the job.
U just like all these other gay fucks, ya not the cream of the crop
Still readin the blah On the shitter, cuz you can't afford to stop it
How the hell you goin to enjoy a shit...With four dudes watchin.
Ya so gameless, and this whole game is, right up this fags alley.
I wouldn't poll the times you've been raped....if we HAD talley's
Better crash out on ya back, ya ass is mine, when your fuckin sleep
Bitch i'll steal ya commissary. And you won't have nothing to eat

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Let ME fiiiinnd ooout

^i think you dissed yourself.. LOL

neway..

faggot you suck.. I'm sendin punches at your dome ho
you dont have sharp lines.. 'n not cuz of the blurryness of the photo
no one ever said you needed to be liked for you to be rapping
but damn you gotta be hated to have mans best friend attacking
most people incarcerated get an ID number.. but this aint fair
cuz that on ya chest aint a prisoner number...
...its how many times you've been raped since you got there
I'ma stab you up.. 'n hit you with punches till you keel over
and after I'm done your shirts like a bad newspaper joke...
...cuz it'll be black, white.. 'n red all over
this dudes a retard.. 'n everyone says they want him dead
he heard they wanted him capped.. so he donned one on his head

all i have time for
g'luck w/ the votes

Yeah, I think Civilized dissed the wrong picture. lol. Its cool tho, he's new here and was confused so voters please don't penalize him for that. Assume that both battlers were dissing the top picture and vote for the better diss. GL guys.

civilized. dont EVER fucking talk bad about my shit when you dont even know what pic to diss. you know what, fuck it. i dont even know why i try to fucking show for this league.

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accomplishments:

being better than you @ life x9.

Area, took this by a landslide. Civ. had no good punches in my eyes, just varying attempts that fell flat. Area had a couple of nice lines on the other hand, but he needs to stay off the played tip (and make his punches hit a lot harder) such as:

faggot you suck.. I'm sendin punches at your dome ho
you dont have sharp lines.. 'n not cuz of the blurryness of the photo
(it's played on all pics)


The rest of his verse was pretty consistant, but could still use improvement. Keep at it both of you, but my vote definately goes to Area.

V/ Area51

Still readin the blah On the shitter, cuz you can't afford to stop it
How the hell you goin to enjoy a shit...With four dudes watchin.

vs.

no one ever said you needed to be liked for you to be rapping
but damn you gotta be hated to have mans best friend attacking
most people incarcerated get an ID number.. but this aint fair
cuz that on ya chest aint a prisoner number...
...its how many times you've been raped since you got there

I got Area takin' this one. Civilized, thought the takin' a shit line was funny cuz from the pic it kinda does look like that, but wasn't feelin' much else. Just felt your bars were worded a bit indirectly on the pic. As u practice more i'm sure u'll improve. Area, man's best friend line was really nice, liked that a lot. Other line was only okay, but felt everything in ur verse was at least average, a pretty consisent verse, just work more on the creativity to land those haymakers.

Vote - Area51