Rules:
No crew votes
No hate votes
No bitches
No whores
1 hour to write after check in
Unlimited bars

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Aight check, waitin on u............

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Unlimited bars??
heck nah cuz i dont want storys i want battle verses lets make it 10 lines 5 bars cool

whateva, u checked then?

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

i see ya tactics with unlimited bars N its wack kid
trying to keep writing till something good hits u, but then that'll be ya mattress / 1
look how u got voters intrest rate going down like u signd up for mortgage
and u'r about to get places stuffed in the back like clothe-line for storage / 2
im done with this fool lets get this battle ova with in a prompt
cuz im about to put M.T face UNDERGROUND performing the A-TOWN-STOMP /3
look there aint no comp, coming from this lame
cuz i've eatin more people with bigger PENUTS in baseball games / 4
look i could drop all fillers and there still no saving u
cuz the only this this faggot consider NICE is on april-fools/ 5

good luck

danm it i messes up last line its soopuse to say..

cuz the only "time"
i aint mean to write this this 2 times aight ya

so read it as

cuz the only TIME

aight...

im still waitting on this fool

Watch as i effect this kid wit an unrelenting intensity
Attackin his frame wit a flow thats thick wit density
He went to bitch slapped and posted up a death wish
So ima batter em, fry em and serve em up like fish
What he dont know is that i'll twist his spinal cord up
Drain the juices out, smile and sip em from a kiddie cup
His record tells the tale, he's been a loser since birth
He's just a talentless shell damned to wander this earth
Well i'm here to give you a death with some dignity
I'll get under yo skin and shred u to pieces cuz ya style aint fittin me

Aight, i dont like being restricted to a set number of lines but whatever

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

damn yo style is fucked up....... good luck tho

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

close battle
intensity effect had some funny lines....i liked mistah tate's punches
overall mistah tate was better

vote=Mistah tate

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shut the fuck up and stop trying to sway votes...

uppin for more votes...........come on yall dont sleep

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Damn yall, yall lookin at this shit accordin to the views, so just drop your explanation and a vote ^^^^^^^^^^^^

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

Dawg This Was A Close
Won Naw Im Jus Kidding
Mistah Tate Won
Dis Battle With Ease
Cause His Lyrics Was
Stronger And Punches
Hurt Him
Return Da Votes
To
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Slugga Vs Da Prodigy
Slugga Vs Hi-c

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I CANT BE WIT
IF YOU NOT WIT ME YOU AGAINST ME
AND IM READY 4 WAR PEACE
BATTLES DAT NEEDS VOTES

Mistah tate merked this fool, wasn't even close... he had harder punches, better struc and flow, and better wordplay...

Intensity- Aight verse, wasn't too great tho. You had straight punches, but they didn't really hit too hard. Ya rhyme scheme was off, and ya opener didn't even rhyme. Also, some of ya lines didn't really make sense, or were just statements, like the " A town stomp" line, and your closer. Some of your lines were stretched, so just work on your struc and punches and elevate.

Mistah Tate- Nice verse from you, you had some hard hittin punches and nice wordplay. You had some nice personals, my favorite line was your opener, that hit hard. Your struc was on track too, which helps your flow. Good verse, i would just work on your complexity a little, but nice verse.