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Old 06-27-05, 01:18 PM   #1
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Freestyles..

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here's the link..its called Down And Out Freestyle...i ain all that great on da mic so dun hurt my feelins 2 bad


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/x...laxxx_music.htm
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Old 06-27-05, 01:26 PM   #2
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betta get some links of tracks u left feedback on ckuz this will get closed...quick...
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Old 06-27-05, 01:36 PM   #3
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Old 06-27-05, 02:03 PM   #4
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u aint 2 bad girl...ur flow is aight 4 a freestyle...this beat is pretty easy to free to, lyrics u droppin r aight, ur flow starts fallin off, in tha way it sounds a lil forced at points, for a newbie 2 this is a pretty gd free..keep dese drops comin
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Old 06-27-05, 02:39 PM   #5
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thanks...more feed back would be appreciated
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Old 06-28-05, 11:29 AM   #6
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show more emotion in ya voice, ma.....you sound ya reading off the page.....emotion will keep a muh fuckah into what you say......ya content was iight, i cant realli diss that, cuz my free styling skills arent all that.....

it was long,....but yeah, work on showing emotion....give us attitude, cuz nobody is gonna feel threatened from listening to that.....
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Old 06-28-05, 02:19 PM   #7
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thanks..n i see wat ur saying..i do sound like im bored when i flow...
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Old 06-29-05, 11:06 AM   #8
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not bad ma....lyrics were tight and flow was aight....just kinda add a lil more personality and expression in it and it'll be perfect...8/10....RTF on my shit..."Fresh Emcee"
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