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Old 02-01-06, 08:40 AM   #1
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let it rain(hott shit yall movin up on tha chartz fast)

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Old 02-01-06, 09:54 AM   #2
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Miss doggystyle has pretty nice voice....if thats her......

you- not bad as well, flow can be little polished but overall decent song and when her chorus comes in it sounds like it was cut and pasted kinda shit cuz the beat becomes weird...its prolly not blended well.
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Old 02-01-06, 10:08 AM   #3
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werd yeah bumpin......................
thanx fer feed its cause her verse stopped so after mine i wanted ger to sing again so i did that im not a very good mixier
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Old 02-01-06, 10:22 AM   #4
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lol, either way that song was tight as hell.

damn....she can sing..... lmfao....

yall sounded real good together keep it up

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Old 02-01-06, 01:36 PM   #5
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bumped............................
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Old 02-01-06, 01:54 PM   #6
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Shes dope singer,few notes off key but still dooooope

Track,your flows gettin better,deliverys koo

emotions nice,feelin your presence on this

suits you dawg

your over dubs should be a lil lower

good verse

good track!

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Old 02-01-06, 01:54 PM   #7
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yerr this track was real nice yo...

the beats sick...
i liked ya emotion, and pressence. ya flow is decent aswell, and your delivery isnt bad at all. she can sing pretty well aswell. yerr nice little R & B track 8.5/10
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Old 02-01-06, 11:37 PM   #8
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real nice track yo....ya girl needs work even tho she has a real nice voice...raw talent tho good shit
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Old 02-02-06, 11:33 AM   #9
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thanx fer th feed uppin
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Old 02-02-06, 01:21 PM   #10
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i didn't like the track for the simple fact that's it's not something i would listen to myself....i wouldn't buy something like this....some people feel this type but not me....the rappin was good but just the track aint really what i like to listen to....so on my scale i'd give it a 6 outta 10 and that's just because when the rappin did start you had a good flow and good lyrics...that's just my take on the song as a whole....keep droppin though i'm sure you got other styles that are tight
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Old 02-02-06, 01:24 PM   #11
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werd thanx fer tha feed and yeah i rap all dif styles
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Old 02-02-06, 04:23 PM   #12
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bumpin.............................
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Old 02-02-06, 04:32 PM   #13
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Listening...

That chick's voice is ill.

Give me this girls addy so I can collab with her. Seriously.

Her part is pretty good.

Long time for you to come in...wow haha.

Flow is getting better everyday.

Lyrics are pretty good. Delivery is on.

Keep it up man...you elevating fast.
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Old 02-04-06, 11:18 PM   #14
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Chick wsa good but her vocals needed to be raised a little. I think you keft a little too much of a gap before you started spitting. You had some pretty nice flow. This is actually a pretty good collab man. I could def hear this on the radio and shit......

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