wadup..

my vote=rapid fire

villagepimp=urs was aite

rapidfire=nice

I'll spew venom virus's have u sick and poor in your health...
This bitch reps another rapper...more than himself!...
Send bullets to ya skull and demolish the left side...
it's sad man you must be embarassin Tech N9ne...
You the village idiot, n ur scared of this evil...
Cuz u know u gettin shot up like a heroin needle...
Rip through this fuckin fags head's the answer...
You wouldn't be sicc if you was half dead w/ cancer...
Village Pimp? looks like the Village People's what u tryin to say...
You don't rep KCMO, more like the YMCA...
aight very basic rymescene nonless had nice structure
came wit a lil creativity and overall basic wittyness but 7/10
I don't need to name my self Rapid Fire, Cuz I already spit 300 miles an hour//
Village Pimp murda you down to the wire, I'm 'bout to spit shit that'll set YOU on fire//
5, 10, 50 lines I rip you, Then after that I could still gash your whole crew//
Dude, what fucks wrong with you, ready for this battle bitch that ain't true//
All you're rapidly firein' is bullshit, The only way you could win is if you bit//
Cuz I'm Kansas City's own undefeated, Only way I lose here is if I get cheated//
And you know your screwed when I'm heated, Cuz I'm fuckin' lyrically burning everyone's ass//
Yeah, the thing you let other guys up in, When you get your daily dose of ass fuckin'//
Rapidly firin' hits and they don't miss, So Go suckin' dicks and drinkin' piss//
Cuz Village Pimp is too good for city status, while I relocate you with duece glock-matics//
this was no poor struc punches were non existent
lines was blah strecthed and had overall ok attempt but 5/10
vote/rapid... ...
hit my sig up its been sleeping for ages.. ..

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basically village pimp lacked rhyme scheme, flow and everything else that makes a good rap battle. structure on that was terrible. I had to read it twice to catch the rhyme scheme.
I don't need to name my self Rapid Fire, Cuz I already spit 300 miles an hour//
Village Pimp murda you down to the wire, I'm 'bout to spit shit that'll set YOU on fire//
5, 10, 50 lines I rip you, Then after that I could still gash your whole crew//
Dude, what fucks wrong with you, ready for this battle bitch that ain't true//
All you're rapidly firein' is bullshit, The only way you could win is if you bit//
Cuz I'm Kansas City's own undefeated, Only way I lose here is if I get cheated//
And you know your screwed when I'm heated, Cuz I'm fuckin' lyrically burning everyone's ass// (((((where is the rhyme to this)))))
the use of fire and you in two lines back to back terrible.
Rapid fire actually had a flow to his verse. and despite what was previously posted, i liked the YMCA joke. nice close
vote to rapid fire
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115158