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Old 12-18-04, 12:57 PM   #1
PuffDaGreat
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pimp shi%

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A yo my game is to break a bitch
Spit this gospel and get this money bitch
players dont get money dont you see my attire
im a pimp in the fleash
armed with a semiautomatic i call breath
fliny words that will send a hoe to her death
I contest im the greatest alive at my profession
if you sit still hoe ima teach you a leason
on how to get this money for me dont you see
we make a great team there aint no i in we
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Old 12-19-04, 12:17 AM   #2
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not very good man......go to tutorials and read up on how to elevate....learn how to use multis, inners, up your vocab., metaphors.....just elevate a lot......no hate...that just wasnt too good
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