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Old 09-27-04, 08:30 PM   #1
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One man.....think about it.....

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One man with one idea.............................................. .............
one plan of salvation for the whole world,all nations.....................
long gone is discrimination,could it happen with 1 man?................
would it take 1 man 2 pursue 1 goal 2 solve all problems for 1 world
or would it take 1 world to solve all problems for **ONE MAN**.....


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Old 09-27-04, 08:30 PM   #2
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can i get feedback on this please.....
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Old 09-27-04, 09:14 PM   #3
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confusing but good..
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Old 09-27-04, 09:27 PM   #4
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you're the 1st man ever on RV to drop a actual poem lol

everyone else jus dropped one verse songs

nice
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Old 09-27-04, 09:37 PM   #5
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thanks for da feedback niggas......uppin on dis poem yall...........
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Old 09-27-04, 09:53 PM   #6
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this was good, i wish there was more too it, because it was interesting, nice vocab, i liked it a lot....pc
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Old 09-27-04, 09:55 PM   #7
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Fluid i saw ur pic

YOU FINE AS HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that is all
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Old 09-29-04, 12:13 PM   #8
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waddup good poem u did a good job at makin me think too lol n that dont happen that often hommie so keep it up
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Old 09-30-04, 12:31 PM   #9
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thanks all.....uppin uppin uppin
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