This is dedicated to CarsonJet


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/babyosirismusic.htm

You dont belong here... You belong reading the rules... then your threads wont get closed so often

__________________
"I Must Be The Greatest"!!!!

intro is weak.....carsonjet is not wack......<<not d/r just facts


this seemed like your reading from your screen


anyway

you need lots more emotion....also raise your voice and try to get your lisp fixed.....
that shit is mad distracting....
you lyrics where nice but your flow was oof in some points...try to memorize atleast some of your lines....also you biggest downfall is your dubbing....you need to lower that volume and add a echo.....

all in all you are good at text but need alot of elevation in audio....

__________________
my MYSPACE is Better than Yours

sup this was pretty cool. Flow was nice in my opinion. Luved the beat too. I dont know or care if dude u talkin about is actually wack or not, but this track was cool.
Peace

PS.
since u was callin everyone wack at the end of the track u know u gonna get some hate, so ha...be ready

__________________
Its the venomous feminist Viscious with verbal sentences....

*SHIESTY~ ONE*
*HAPPY~HOLIDAYZ~BITCHEZ*


*SHISTEY~ ONE*

HELLO! well ummm
CLICK TO HEAR MY SHORT ODE TO RAPVERSE "