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Old 01-15-06, 05:20 PM   #1
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I finally got a mic but i'm rusty in all aspects IMO. Let's see what y'all think.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=301790

And the old as hell, but still legal links...

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205333
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=217250

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Old 01-15-06, 05:25 PM   #2
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Word.....welcome back.

Suprisingly your flow was pretty nice on this one. I liked the Number One Track without droppin 20 names line.....You quality was actually pretty nice as well.....this wasn't that bad of a track overall.....honestly. Good job man ™
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Old 01-15-06, 06:07 PM   #3
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peeping beat coo..... quality aiight. pretty nice.

damn your flow pretty tight dude. good lyrics. lmao @ 20 names line. dope multi's here and there. I ain't really like beat, ehh getting annoying. lol But your flow and shit good. nice delivery. OVerall, pretty tight man.

8.7/10 really liked it. emotion maybe up a tiny bit. overall dope.

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Old 01-15-06, 06:44 PM   #4
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this shit was aiigh'
got kinda dull after awhile due to lack of delivery and emotion
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Old 01-15-06, 06:49 PM   #5
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this was hott especialy for a coemback/dust the dust off the mic song...i was definitly feelin this song...lyrics and flow were real hott...nice job mayne, rtf...
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Old 01-16-06, 02:40 AM   #6
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Thanks everyone, bump.
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Old 01-16-06, 12:49 PM   #7
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You guys.......c'monnnnnn.
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Old 01-16-06, 03:19 PM   #8
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Beat is good

I see you like pop music


I like ur flow/deliv. combination


lacks energy tho, especially since ur really coming lyrical...expression man!


I wouldn't mind collabin with you on some real tip


Good track



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Old 01-16-06, 07:59 PM   #9
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Word, maybe soon. Bump.
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Old 01-16-06, 08:00 PM   #10
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yea thats the first that came to mind it was lackin emotion wit those lyrics..nice drop fo real

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Old 01-16-06, 10:09 PM   #11
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your flow is cool as shit.. i really like it.. but i agree with everyone.. ur emotion could be upped
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Old 01-17-06, 12:25 AM   #12
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Yo, pretty decent track. Quality was really good. Your flow was simple, and didnt have a lot of variety throughout the track. Just work on changing your ability to deliver your words with a larger variety of difference, except for the same sentence structure that you have now. Your emotion feel off half way through, which made me lose interest. But pretty good track. Uppin for my boi S to the O... C.
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Old 01-17-06, 01:19 AM   #13
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You sounded like a penis in autumn. or something.

But cool. Welcome back. Your old quality sucked ass, glad to see its better now.
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Old 01-17-06, 10:10 PM   #14
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Thanks guys.

Bump.
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Old 01-23-06, 01:44 AM   #15
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yeah, it was fresh, pretty sweet for being rusty....did start to get a little dull though, liked the "called the best" line, lol, good stuff man, keep up
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