weeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaakkkkkkkkkkk battle peeps kinda what u expect from newbs kinda hard to tell who won as the verses both lacked. The only good thing really was the structure coz it was basic and none tried to over do their verses.

But frankly ima have to give this to reddot06 jus coz i laughed at the lines ever heard of drinkin urself sober...well red did that in rap terms both need desperate elevating if they wanna succeed yall need to work on the wordplay punches metaphors the whole works.

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Imma Go Wit Reddot Cuz His Had Better Dtructure, Punches and personals need work. But Ya Had The Right Concept And Were Able To Pull Out The Win.

bowelle Ya Verse Needes Alot Of Elevation but ya punches were a bit betta than reds but ya structure wasn't all that good and ya had no multis

Both Need To Establish a Sense Of Flow Cuz This Battle Lacked It

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Fourmost aka Verb

Ok red opened really well and closed aiight I think. But all together I give red this vote.