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Old 08-27-05, 03:00 PM   #1
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..Anticipation..

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...i'm doin a spin-off of T.I.P's "Motivation" joint..it'z about time i set tha record str8 & diz is a song decidated 2 ne & evabody who is against me FUCK U!!...

[Intro]
...Hataz if u don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation)
...Hataz if u don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation)
...If u faggots don't like me par, u betta keep footin along, nigga...(Anticipation)
...Ya hataz can't stand me par, it'z best u keep footin along, nigga...


...If u niggaz want Beef, i'm down 4 Confrontation...
...i'll Freeze Ya Mind Up, when i put Cold Steel 2 ya Head without Hesitation...
...takin me 4 a joke, shit bitch u must got me mistaken 4 a Trick...
...i'm not in a Gang, but luv 2 c ur Blood Drip afta i let my gun start 2 Crip...
...cuz i'm sick of tha Stunts, u niggaz tryin 2 pull hopin nobody Notice...
...when it'z obvious y'all r no where near Talented wit ur I.P sho'in Novice...
...like in a Whip, i Mash Tha Gas & Accelerate on tha track wit Aggression...
...when alot of u Un-Skilled Emcees, jus sit back & b 2nd Guessin...
...half of y'all neva even did a Crime, or let alone even seen a Burna...
...98% of ya get Sick & Throw Up, when it comes time 4 u 2 Murder...
...i pay no attention 2 tha lines, dat most of u Clowns b Spitin...
...i guarantee u dat most of it'z played out or jus plain Bitin...
...most hate cuz i have tha skills dat dey wanna Possess...
...i lay in Anticipation waiting 4 u Bitches 2 come & test...


Anticipation
Niggaz hatin tryna bring me mo' stress...(Anticipation)
Wanna put an end 2 my process...(It'z Anticipation)
U snakes wanna block my shine...(Anticipation)
I got sumthang 2 put on ya mind...(Anticipation)
Y'all must think dat i'm a hoe...(Anticipation)
I guess i gotta continue 2 let niggaz know...(It'z Anticipation)
Suckaz niggaz think dey can take me under...
My problem solva will blast, & leave dem wrapped in white coverz...(Anticipation)


...if i hit Rock Bottom, niggaz Happy 2 C...
...jus cuz when i Rhyme, Pressure is applied makin it hard 4 dem 2 Breathe...
...i'm stay on my Q'z & P'z, & neva get Caught Slippin off my Feet...
...tha only way u niggaz will eva b Great, is if u try 2 go & Repeat...
...Laugh, & Lie 2 ya friends bout how ur tha Best at diz Rap Shit...
...u'll get Pimped all ova tha track, dat people will believe ur my Bitch...
...Punk Bitches, r gonna start Bowing Down 2 me & Face Tha Facts...
...dat U & 50 Cent raps, r 1 in tha same, dat means y'all shit is Wack...
...my lyrics r Efficient, Unbearable & leave alot of people in a Haze...
...while urs r Contained, Apprehensive, & like Prisoners stay locked in a Cage...
...i'm in a Rage, cuz tha lyme verses i hear now & dayz r way out of Date...
...coming Slicka, & wit more Original Concepts den ne otha dat luv 2 Hate...
...so if it'z issues u wanna resolve wit me, pick ne time either Night or Day...
...Anticipation Level is building, i'm Unyielding, so fuck ur crew & ne of y'all Feelings...

o yea here's my link also: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=206217
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Old 08-27-05, 03:06 PM   #2
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Damn why arent you still in TT
this shit was nice
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Old 08-27-05, 06:48 PM   #3
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thanx homie i appreciate it still uppin 4 more feed it'll b returned
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Old 08-28-05, 04:12 AM   #4
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damn this is ok,good deep read..nice drop.
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Old 08-28-05, 10:21 AM   #5
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still uppin 4 more feed ...stop sleepin on diz 1 here
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Old 08-28-05, 11:00 AM   #6
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to much gun play n misdirected lines...
you'll be good if you stay workin at it
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speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
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then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
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Old 08-28-05, 01:44 PM   #7
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ight i appreciate it still uppin 4 more feed diz time give me constructive criticism instead of jus tha obvious
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Old 08-29-05, 12:15 AM   #8
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this was a solid piece, real gangsta lol ya know?......your structure was iight....but i wasnt feelin the font and colors...a little eye soring....you had excellent wordplay and good rhyme scheme the hook was nice......overall a solid drop...7.5/10...keep it comen fam

and get at me if you eva want to do a collab o yea ya vocab was tight too good job
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Old 08-29-05, 10:03 AM   #9
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erm aight drop consistent in aspects but a little too ya know?stop talkni bout the same thing nice vocab nice flow overall 6/10
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Old 08-29-05, 10:29 AM   #10
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I don't really enjoy reading pieces like this but anyway. The concept was uhm grimey and gangsta I suppose and that's the overall vibe it gave me as well. The vocab was on point, had some interesting shit in there, good lines with nice wordplay but I feel you could've used some more variation and creativity you know. The flow was good though.

Keep at it!
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Old 08-29-05, 11:30 PM   #11
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its was dope and nice way of using T.I's
Motivation its was a decent drop and decent
vocabulary ovarall ma nig u get a

9 out of 10
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Old 08-29-05, 11:39 PM   #12
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dat'z wazzup much luv 2 all tha real good & bad constructive criticism & not bs stuff jus comin out tha side of ya mouth fa sho
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