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Old 04-04-06, 09:47 AM   #1
Lunatik
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THA Luna tik (freestyle) Must read

IP: 1FAE 749F

Yo Lunatiks tha rookie dat can serve da vets
U ain’t serve tha reps, u were meant to make spills and watch me clean it like serviettes

Demolition krew, u build yo walls and in chorus watch it all shattered
U couldn’t git piss like me if u had problems with yo gallbladder (Whoa)

Look! stop wit tha bullshit, u can’t come at me with a 40 Cal and Tech
Cuz my artillery is aged but adept, u fucking with a Falconet

Then again maybe a Howitzer, u blo wind storms while Lunatik blows twisters
Is his flo sicker, yes, I don’t waste spit I pour tha whole pitcher (Wow)

Bring yo whole krew, yo brother and cousin can’t rid dis street sweeper
I’ll tear u and then grind yo family roots up like a weed eater (Damn)

U aint gangsta,sad when blind men can see a fake G too
U can keep wit rappin at concerts, i’ll stick wit blowing sites up like I’m owning V-2’s!

U ain’t even a hustler, I got tha status of a BOSS Embedded
Wut coke? Only powder u coppin, prick, is tha Covergirl Cosmetics (LOL)

So now u kno, I got tha flo dat’ll rip-thru G’s
If dat fails, a pistol blast will git yo life Unplugged like Alicia Keyes (Ill)


Yo, Luna, git at me, these r just warm ups nigga, I want tha title mayne, I’m still a free agent someone holla at me!!!!!!!! U won’t find no-one real as me!

HOLLA!

Yo Uppin fo feed, or shout outs from krewz, or both.
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Old 04-04-06, 09:50 AM   #2
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Old 04-09-06, 03:20 PM   #3
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This was pretty decent, wasnt feeling the spaced out lines so much
wordplay was ok, nothing to exciting, umm basically this was an average piece
alot of room for improvement keep at it homie
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Old 04-10-06, 10:39 PM   #4
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