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Old 04-15-06, 10:12 PM   #1
chip
pain is weakness leaving the body
 
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just wonderin...

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....why no one leaves links anymore? here's mine:

link

iight, now heres a lil somethin for u...

haphazard this bastard the top gun
ain't braggin bout my ammo, killin y'all in shot one
wit a tongue like a shotgun spittin lyrical shells
that'll have emcees steppin to me seekin spiritual help
"dear lord, thanks for my dictionary, thesauras and my i-pod
so i can stay on chip's nuts a little longer, my God
his flow is so nuts, wish i was like that
i just pray he teaches my lesson so i can try dat..."
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Old 04-22-06, 02:32 PM   #2
scanz
-da prophit-
 
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been awhile since ive read one of ur pieces. that has almost aflow of eminem... pretty good thou. if u dont mind ima leave a short piece too:

hello, my name is scanz, and im bout dead as slim shady.
even thou he sounds like peterbrady for doing that kim lady.
so slay me, cus im 300% pure alcoholic.
like slim said, we gota dieseas but they dont know wut to call it.
takin a razor blade cut u open, and watch u guts split.
thats the same razor i used to shave my nuts with.
but dont worry all i got is cancer, aids, and some STD.
im proble this insane cus no one baptised me.

lol im feelin depressed to day. word.... check out my piece on OM. im tired.
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