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Old 02-28-06, 06:06 AM   #1
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a diss to a fat bitch i know name jamie chek it out it's hallirious

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she uses syrup on her pancakes
if she gets hungry enough shell eat her head flakes
fake snow makes good for snowboarding
i cover up the brightest and oldest cold morning
yo.. this bitch is crazy
if she was to have kids the'd probley be crack babies
have you done it latly i just don't know
shed be the one to sell her snacth for snow so lets go
bitch. you fat ass hoe you could probley be the remix to the tootsie rool
if you don't eat it though wich you'll probley do
thats why your blood types rague foo
j.a.m.i.e i seen you on a photo of the fat obeast
you smash og's.. openly
it'must be because your fat as hell
you need a double wide jail sail
and it's just the truth
when you eat spaghetti you probley eat the spoon
the porno of your dog is comming soon
telling hitler you like your jew with bar-b-Q
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Old 02-28-06, 06:08 AM   #2
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uppin........uppin.........uppin.........uppin.... .. come on yaw i know your gonna like this shit
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Old 02-28-06, 06:09 AM   #3
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Old 02-28-06, 06:10 AM   #4
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Old 02-28-06, 05:46 PM   #5
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THAT SHIT SUCKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ASS CHECKS. I swear if you posted up a pic with you smilin on it i bet your teeth would like its been munching buttholes for breakfast
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Old 02-28-06, 06:50 PM   #6
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It wasnt that good u was tryin to hard to be funny and it wasnt really funny at all
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Old 02-28-06, 06:59 PM   #7
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sorry wasnt that good your punches had potential tho keep elevating
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Old 02-28-06, 07:24 PM   #8
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Thank you. Just up the content on in your rhymes and put more thoughts in them. Reading that made me feel like i was in 6th grade again.
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Old 03-02-06, 04:09 PM   #9
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yo this was in no way funy,..... it was actually hella stupid.... but whats funny is

how your attempt to make some one feel bad actually made you look extremely stupid.... so i guess Carma did its job here today.....
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Old 03-02-06, 08:51 PM   #10
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that shit wasnt that funny. some good rhymes but not at all funny. i think i laugh more when i see some one snezze. for real kid. and the punches were like bitch slaps...
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Old 03-02-06, 08:57 PM   #11
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OMG your such a herb, go shit on yourself.
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Old 03-02-06, 09:35 PM   #12
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Not feeling this, your flow feels off unless the beat changes. No humor, no real hard hitting punches, just nothing that would make me feel bad if I was her.
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Old 03-07-06, 01:44 PM   #13
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dat was ass d3y should lock dis shit u suck monkey balls
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Old 03-07-06, 02:19 PM   #14
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lol @ the snowboarding line
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Old 03-07-06, 05:09 PM   #15
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Er...I don't know about you guys, but Italians and half-italians like me don't eat spaghetti with a spoon.
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