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Old 05-31-06, 02:32 AM   #1
SpokenBluntly
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She's Baaaaaaaaaaack

IP: 4699 A3BA

FEMALES THAT SPIT most dudes be like "yea yea ignore her"../
BUT I Got punch lines like 3 pointers in the final Seconds of the Forth Quarter/
And IM the type of chick to CHop Up ya Youngest Daughter/
Then ask u if you want SPICY OR ORIGINAL HER BREAST OR A LEG QUARTER/
And this KEYSTYLE IS CLOSE TO MY FREESTYLES SO CALL EM KIN/
THEY CALL IT ASSULT WIT A DEADLY WEAPON WHEN I PIC UP AN INK PEN/
TOUCH A MIC AND ITS CALLED A "LEBRE" ..DUDE IM STRAIGHT PIERCING YA CHIN/ (ask me if u need explanation for that line)
Imma be Honest I don't carry guns cuz ppl TALK IN THE STREETS/
I GOT DUDES DAT TOTE TOOLS THAT'll HAVE U BREAK DANCIN' ON THE CONCRETE/
AND DON'TWORRY IM NOT USED TO TO DEFEAT/
SO I'LL STICK AROUND AND SHOW YOU BASTARDS WHAT ITS LIKE TO COMPETE/
and i don't NEED YALL WACK ASS OPINIONS I GOT COMMON SENSE/
CONSIDER ME A TRIOLOGY BITCHES STRIKE 3 TIMES JUST TO LEAVE YOU IN SUSPENSE/
LETS BE HONEST MOST OF YOU ARE WHITE KIDS
WITH A SUBURBON TYPE STENCH/
just reading this keystyle is making frail niccas flinch.....

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Old 05-31-06, 11:49 AM   #2
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feed back??? would be nice...
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Old 05-31-06, 11:51 AM   #3
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Shit was hot get on yahoo and hit me up I been looking for a gangsta female rapping but this was hitting I'd give it a 8/10
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Old 05-31-06, 12:29 PM   #4
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Thanks for the invite and the comments...dats whats up
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Old 05-31-06, 01:04 PM   #5
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Yeah could you rtf on the link in my sig
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Old 06-09-06, 10:34 PM   #6
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Better Than Most Male Mc's, & This Was Just A Keystyle? Some Of These Dudes Writtin Shit Cant Even Fuck Witt That. Short Ass Lil 16 But Punchlines Made It Hot.
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Old 06-10-06, 06:44 AM   #7
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ym...yeah this was nice for a start...decent punchlines...but try making ur post a lil more attractive(presentation)...that also counts and err...flow was a lil off tho...just hit on that then u'd be complete...


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Old 06-11-06, 03:34 AM   #8
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hahahaha, yes, yes, yes.... us is back. I see u, feelin that drop too, u came out hard and hit 'em where it hurt. Finally sum real as niggas up here that flow deadly. Keep 'em up my gurl.... U kno who it is, holla at me, yup
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