well, i am interested in poems of all kinds and find that love is possibly one of the most difficult things to write about because it is all that is and all that isn't and all the crap in between. I really do like ur style riccard, i appreciate the way u approached the topic as it shows how love isn't black or white. It's a phase everyone either goes thru in a relationship or goes thur after it, and i like how u mixed the end of the relationship with the end of the poem, and u having nothing left to write. It's ominous. thumbs up from me.

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I'm white so u KNOW i can't rap =)

I will definitely RTF if u leave a link, thanks!