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01-07-09, 03:02 AM
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Good verse. See, the rhyme scheme wasn't forced here, and I just read it like a breeze. Unlike some other OM's I've read, I'm glad you didn't make some Shakespearish type verse, as there's nothing wrong with a little simplicity.
Yeah, keeping making stuff in this style.. 9/10. |
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