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07-28-03, 05:50 PM
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~"Reppin"~
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Check my track "Reppin" just started this soundclick page too....enjoy....and lets get some feedback if possible....
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/glockpusha.htm |
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07-29-03, 04:21 AM
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damm people do sleep on these pieces shii....
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07-29-03, 04:39 PM
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zzzzzz freal
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07-30-03, 02:48 AM
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iight w/e no feedback i aint fixin tah front...
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07-30-03, 03:42 AM
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hahahahhaAHAHAH AAAAHAHAH hahahahh AHHAHAH hahahah AHHAHAAHHA hhahaha HAHAHAHAHHA hahahaa AHAHHAHA hahhaha HAHAHAH ahahha hAHAHAHAHH hahahah AHHAHAH ahhahaha AHHAHAH hahahahhahaahahahahahhahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
HAHAHAH hahhaahhahahahahah aaaHAHAHAH hahh AHHAHA hhhAHAHA AHAHAHH AHH AH HAH HA HAH AH how can you listen to jedi mind and sound like that? seriously though you just didnt flow. nothin personal man im just high as shit. elevate |
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07-30-03, 05:29 PM
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Aight i'll show some love, just remember to return it...
Aight, the beat is nice on this, the flow is kinda choppy off and on at times, the lyrics are content are decent for the beat...i think overall you need to increase your flow, and you're set, good drop return the love and drop some feedback |
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07-30-03, 08:16 PM
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iight thanx yo imma work on audios freal and imma get blazed and write some lyrics haha uppin.....
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07-30-03, 11:20 PM
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this was garbage....no type of delivery....no flow, and lyrics was the main thing i wasn't feeling....show more emotion when u spit, organize your lyrics properly, and ur delivery has to be on point with the beat feel me.....HOLLA
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07-31-03, 05:05 AM
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^ knows what hes talkin about
sorry about last nite hahah anyway. if you use a simpler beat maybe you could flow better. also the rhymes and structure were very simple, i think if you added adjectives and shit like that. runnin with the west coast until the day i die/ im smokin that blue haze that elevate me to a skyscraper high/ we get by my crew gon find you and da hydrashoks ensure you die/ somethin like that. na mean but first pick a simpler beat to flow to. pz |
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08-01-03, 01:13 AM
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yuh i like da beat but u know its like my pilot track first one thats crappy and more elevation will be put in to tha audios but i admit im workin on dis shi thanx tho.....
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