ight since im currently elavatin I was wondering if i can join and if you want too see my stuff then pm me.

heres this topical i did

A sense of anxiousness in every breath.
dreary visions as I watch my footsteps.
possessd pausing in stance gaze at her house address.
Knocking on her door patiently waiting for a answer.
She opened up to find out shes a belly dancer.
walking beside me is a beautiful girl askin questions.
lost for words with no expressions and embarrassing impressions.
hearts racing fast feels like a formula 1 race pulling tons.
She winks at me and laughs and her smiles as good as the sun.
Finally we enter the restraunt obliged tried telling jokes an I almost cried.
Couldn’t make up my mind to be embarrassed or to run and hide.
No appetite and I havn’t ate a single meal in hours.
Reached in my jacket to pull out a bouquet of flowers.
Something in me seemed to seize
I blink a couple times and I can finally see
Now that im talking I feel I cant quit never leavin I wont make it
Walkin lonely now and I cant face the truth to brace it.
Goin home no one to love on or hug
an even no one for me to give back rubs.
Only to wake up and see shes lying beside
Now living our lifes one day at a time.

I kno kindarushed verse but like i said im elavatin so yea.

you do know this is an audio crew right????


if you got a mic... plug that ish in and spit something nicca



LMAO


werd

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aww ight then nvm peace

i still read ya piece and it definitely needs a better structure than how it's written... ya thoughts are all over the place... lots of stuff doesn't make sense where it's placed... potential...keep workingat it

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why dont u ever talk to me anymore

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Someone send me the password

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iiight....sent.

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why are yall not established yet yall been up longer then some of tha established crews

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Cuz Fools Been Sleepin On Us But Fuck It We Are Who Are Dont Neeed To Be In An Established Spot To Know We Are!!!

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i gotta get my comp set up.... you never on aim when i go on...lol.... i'm at my bro-in-laws til my house gets finished... 3 more weeks then it's back to dooing audio!!

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uppin this shyt.... yo tito.... holla at a nukka.... matta fact... pm a nukka with da digits... i'll holla atcha so we can set some shyt up!!!!

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yo...i got 2 more audio kats from BK... they used to rhyme with me up at W4th before the hiphop cops shut everything down!....werd.... my mans Animosity and my mans Amsterdamn aka Barz-N-Penstripes

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get them niggas on the mic and lets get some tracks jumpin off wit them niggas mayne!!!

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Full Metal Bronsky Dropin 1st Quarter 08'