{talkin}
yeaaaaaah, this goes out 2 my thug misses....u know tha real down ass chicks that's always gon ride no matter wut. u know who u are. this is 4 u

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Affiliates through affection, my poetics penetrate with a passion
a love drivin by natural highs as we both climax to satisfactoin
physical attraction requires sexual action i'll make ya bed rock
picture me pumpin up and down with motions fluid as jump shots
us switching positions as pleasure and pain are deeply inflicted
you're screamin louder and cryin as if dyin as a nigga shitfts it
after it's over u claim u hate me........................ but that's a lie
i say i love you and your heart melts........ i see it in your eyes
you're taken by suprise. yet your reaction soon emplies........
that tha feeling is mutual......................i know u feelin me
but for fear of bein hurt for some reason u won't reveal to me
............................how u feel inside, although i wanna know
take a sip of this thug's passion baby and let ya thoughts go


hook: (same as original{sung by some bitch i can't rememba tha name of})

{i heard it's tha bomb}
{and u got it goin on}
{give me some of your thug passion baby}
{you got me drippin wet}
{from tha way u make me sweat}
{give me some of your thug passion baby}- etc




is this tha beginnin of somethin? our conversations get deeper
but it still seems like i gotta affectionately fight to reach her
see she's not tha ordinary female........ that ass is to die for
plus her lips is givin me hell, beggin me to just try more
and see i can't blame anybody else for feelin baby girl's smile
ma got beauty and booty with titties to drive a whole city wild
but i'm deeper than that, to me all of that shit is irrelevant
she's got incredible talent not to mention that she's inteligent
one way to describe your beauty is that of a black queen
i can invision u gigglin as i scheme to get u out ya gap jeans
u got me beggin like a crack fiend............. with persistance
praising your sillhouette as you walk off into the distant....
sunset your tounge's wet from a french kiss foreverlasting
is this love that's wut i'm askin ...........................................
...........................................pissy drunk offa thug passion

hook 3x

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pretty decent piece to me liked the multies the hook was coo structure was coo flow was right on point and you didn't kepp it simple 7.5/10 rtf in "I Aint Fuckin Wit Cha"

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aight homie ^^ good lookin out. uppin

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Yooo dis was nice cuzz! bringin back sum pac shyt, dats dope, good vocab, really complex throughout, u stuck to the same sorta rhyme scheme as pac on the original version 2, dats kool....u killed it, flow & vocab was off the hook cuzz! dope shyt

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This was nice considering it's a thug piece. The multies were ok and the flow was good. Try to keep up with more than two syllables in rhymes.

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thanks 4 tha tip mayn...i'll keep it in mind...uppin

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uppin bitches......

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uppin again beeeeeeatches

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u-p-p.....i-n-g

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uuuuuuuppppppppppp

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Flow silly with nobility like a king this type thing is royalty
Clings to loyalty when dealing with rap like Jackson, Latoya be
Reading palms and proceeding calm with success not dumb
Verses I be delivering them bold while shivering and cold from
Snowfall my flow all ice but right and nice like white rice and rum
No sense nagging it causes intense haggling like high prices
Outrageous but advantageous to shop around town end the crisis
Not dodging the doors where bargain galore with food make sacrifices