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08-11-03, 01:05 PM
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neBo_Simplicity [Featuring DjX on the Beat]
IP: 652A 6B0F
DjX on the beat... neBo on the raps. Check it out. ROUGH DRAFT still... but here is a taste.
http://www.soundclick.com/util/stre...?ID=503437&q=Hi Here is my first track (still in production) in my studio. Still a rough draft and we still need to work on some stuff... but here is a little flavor. Let me know what you all think. Last edited by |[-neBo-]| : 08-11-03 at 07:19 PM. |
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08-11-03, 07:19 PM
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IP: 652A 6B0F
comon ya'll ... listen to your homeboy DjX and the new guy around!!! its hot!!! some feedback please. even if you hatin i want feedback!
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08-11-03, 07:44 PM
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IP: 6B69 4527
your voice is kinda low. but i love the mellow type shit. beat is ill. Nice for you first track. put a little more emotion and u should be fine.
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08-11-03, 07:50 PM
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IP: C1DA C961
nice beat man felt it and ya flow but the sound wasnt too good couldnt really hear you sounded like you was too far from the mic then just made it louder but nice drop man waitin for more
peep my new drop.1 |
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08-11-03, 10:16 PM
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IP: B5AB 55DF
wasn't feelin the beat....umm your delivery was pretty good, and you flowed good with the beat....but i think you couldve killed it more if you picked up the tone in your voice, and showed more emotion....at least make it seem like u actually wanted to rap....lol.....but production was good, hook was kinda week to me, couldve been better....but pretty good for just a rough draft...keepin doing your thing....OnE
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