Looked like you were sarcastic through the whole thing. Were you? It's hard to tell.

It wasn't bad though. I was thinking you don't like who you are since it looked like sarcasm. I don't know. Everyone already said this but, there was a real lack of emotion. Or I just didn't pick up on it. To me it read kind of bland. Wasn't really feeling it but not saying it's bad.

Keep on writing and posting them up here. Not everyone is going to like what you write so don't let a few responses stop you from doing your thing.