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02-16-04, 06:59 PM | #20 | ||
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LOL, you and your "short" story's. anyway. very well done my man, I don't know how you can have the gumption to sit down and right a 500 bar essay like this, but whatever it is that drives you to do so, would be most welcome in my repetoirre. but anyways. nice piece, good vocab, decent flow. I have always loved your imagery and this piece is no exception. very good job, keep em coming, and use a smaller font lol, makes the structure look better. 8/10
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