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Ryda | 5 | 100.00% | |
Big_O | 0 | 0% | |
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10-14-05, 10:05 PM | #1 | |
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Ryda vs Big_O
IP: 6A7E D538
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10-14-05, 10:06 PM | #2 | |
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IP: C042 AA51
Ryda has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:06 PM.
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10-14-05, 10:19 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 6A7E D538
Big_O has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-14-05 10:19 PM.
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10-14-05, 10:23 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 6A7E D538
Ay yo ryda i know what you are........
Thats a bitch give it up man you got no skill your a fucked up man Every one goes and calls you a dick ryda* But not me.....not today I know the truth That you are gay theres no reason to point fingers We in massachusetts man it legal**At least thats what they say You think you gonna win man? No way You got two wins so you think you good you grew up in rockland man that aint the hood*** You go to rockland High thinkin you the shit But there one little problem man you cant spit SO i basically win your two basic...... Now man wake up its time to face it.......... __________________________________________ Dropped in like 5 minutes............... *In like every battle as personal peopel call him a dick RYDA **In Massachusetts gay marriage is legal ***I got to the same school as him
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10-14-05, 10:24 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 6A7E D538
Good Luck Man.......................................
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10-14-05, 10:26 PM | #6 | |
Bringin The Rukas
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IP: C042 AA51
i assinate this MC like there is no tomorrow
this kids new name is gunna be john doe cause afta this battle he'll be nonexistent this kid rhymes are not consistent kids got nuthin wit his wack rhymes hes says he's big_O But last time i heard his win colum was Zero thats why ur record is consealed i got this win like a rap deal that is sealed he's gunna lose this battle like the rest of his wit this battle caught him off suprize like a pop quiz he aint ready for this afta i win this battle ill be in bliss Man this kid should just commit suicide kids got no chance against me, battlin me it's a homicide
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10-14-05, 10:28 PM | #7 | |
Bringin The Rukas
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IP: C042 AA51
good luck kid..........................................
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10-14-05, 10:28 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 6A7E D538
I gott 200 posts -Light wieght................yea UPPIN...............
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10-14-05, 11:58 PM | #9 |
Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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IP: 8752 F263
Voted For: Ryda
ok ur structure is a little better vocab ok but in parts the rhyme scheme is weak but better throw in multis its needed in text u had one good personal with the 0 line pretty good but u need more big o wack kis nop flow because of ur structure vocba lacking personals where are they? elevate rtf or i will remove my vote thank you http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210496 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211555 http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=210494
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10-15-05, 09:17 AM | #10 | |
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IP: A181 D033
Voted For: Ryda
this battle wasn't too good at all to be completely honest. the punches were completely missing the target/non existant for real. but ryda got this one as his verse, even though there were obvious flaws, consistently attempted to rhyme, unlike big o who only started rhyming in the last 3 bars. let me break this down. i assinate this MC like there is no tomorrow this kids new name is gunna be john doe ^^no punch 0/10 cause afta this battle he'll be nonexistent this kid rhymes are not consistent ^^flows weak structure is poor. statement as opposed to a punch 0/10 kids got nuthin wit his wack rhymes hes says he's big_O But last time i heard his win colum was Zero ^^should have rhymed with "big_O" and not just "O" and the punch was weak 1/10 thats why ur record is consealed i got this win like a rap deal that is sealed ^^rhymed the word "sealed" with itself and more self glorification than punch 0/10 he's gunna lose this battle like the rest of his wit this battle caught him off suprize like a pop quiz he aint ready for this afta i win this battle ill be in bliss ^^statement no punch.you shouldn't attempt three line bars just yet 0/10 Man this kid should just commit suicide kids got no chance against me, battlin me it's a homicide ^^"suicide" and "homocide" don't rhyme and non existant punch 0/10 overall 1/60 __________________________________________________ Ay yo ryda i know what you are........ Thats a bitch give it up man you got no skill your a fucked up man Every one goes and calls you a dick ryda* But not me.....not today I know the truth That you are gay theres no reason to point fingers We in massachusetts man it legal**At least thats what they say You think you gonna win man? No way ^^^none of it rhymed and there were no punches 0 You got two wins so you think you good you grew up in rockland man that aint the hood*** You go to rockland High thinkin you the shit But there one little problem man you cant spit SO i basically win your two basic...... Now man wake up its time to face it.......... ^^^this was all garbage to be honest 0 you both really need to elevate to be honest, but ryda margnially took this one peace |
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10-15-05, 10:23 AM | #11 | |
Bringin The Rukas
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IP: 3240 794D
Big_O u go to rockland High too, aight uppin fo votes
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10-15-05, 11:02 AM | #12 | |
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IP: 4ADE 8AFA
Voted For: Ryda
my vote goes to ryda for many reasons......... 1 he had the better punches. EX: "cause afta this battle he'll be nonexistent this kid rhymes are not consistent" and Man this kid should just commit suicide kids got no chance against me, battlin me it's a homicide 2 you structure is getting better just work that vocab a lil bit -Big O.... u almost had no punches..and your strure was way off... ounce again you gotta step up....... This was honest feedback RTF sometime
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10-15-05, 12:08 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 6A7E D538
What eva PEI..................Uppin......................
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10-15-05, 12:10 PM | #14 | |
Never Around
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This was feedback posted for Ryda
IP: 88B9 D29F
poll z
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10-15-05, 01:50 PM | #15 | |
NO SURRENDER
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IP: 7CCC 4417
Voted For: Ryda
i UNDERSTOOD SOME OF YOURS AT LEAST, BIG'S WAS ALL OVER THE PLACE... ...I SUGGEST YOU READ SOME TUTORIALS AND FINDS A DECENT STRUCTURE AND RHYMESCHEME. R CAME HARDER HERE... RTF IN SIG ASAP... NO HATE
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