Topic: Wonderful Women

Maybe its their curved behinds, maybe their rounded breasts
Often i find myself captivated by a womans Mounds of Flesh
Hours ive spent in admiration of their toned hourglass figures
Watching outta my window, in every Female i see a Princess
Its been said maybe im obsessed with the opposite sex, but
now women call me Carpenter...always waking up to Wood.
I maybe should learn to settle down, but its real hard at night
now im in & out of ladies knickers, more than a transvestite.
Impressed by simply things, like their hair, or how they talk
Mainly because my Sex Drives . . them up the fucking wall!
with luck i'll discover the girl who'll stay true, make me change
& meet Mrs. Right, im just prayin her first name isnt "Always"
But for now im enjoying the summer, and i dont mean to gloat
i got bitches and budweiser . . im taking the Tops off of both.
Most guys arent looking for love, just a girl to fuck for a while
but for me its different.. .im after personality and a cute smile.
nothing too wild, just a woman to call mine and give my heart
because women are wonderful creatures, presents from God.

nothing too wild, just a woman to call mine and give my heart
because women are wonderful creatures, presents from God.

^^nice ending....talkin bout sex and fuckin lol...funny as hell..but still respectin in the end....Nice peice...
Flow was good.....i couldnt quite follow some of it fo some reason.....still good...
Vocab....Like always, Sick
wordplay, Nice use of it...

Ima have to give you a 9/10...nice drop

check out mine and bash's Hard Times

^^^LOL this had funny shit in it...the whole verse was nice but these are my favourite few

with luck i'll discover the girl who'll stay true, make me change
& meet Mrs. Right, im just prayin her first name isnt "Always"

I maybe should learn to settle down, but its real hard at night
now im in & out of ladies knickers, more than a transvestite.

but then u had nice lines like......

Hours ive spent in admiration of their toned hourglass figures
Watching outta my window, in every Female i see a Princess

and

nothing too wild, just a woman to call mine and give my heart
because women are wonderful creatures, presents from God.

dopeness......1

^ Cheers Kass, glad someone caught the "Always Right" line, i laughed at that as i wrote it. .

lol, that always line was creative dawg.
The piece was pretty good an' shit, liked the creativity put in there, and how it was out of respect of the opposite sex. Nice piece, nothing really to criticize, because nothing was wrong with it.
peace

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i was feelin this piece rite here, flow was hot, vocab, also had some mad nice wordplay in there...transvestite line was real dope with ^^^the above ones mentioned aswell...same here...nothin to criticize...oNe

that was hot

^ You Can Get Banned For One Line Replies, Son. .

nice drop

fuk the herbish replies^

flow was solid.....nice word play

the mrs. right line was dope and alot of funny shit....the trans knickers lol
and the tops off both

comical but also serious....good shit
word play was the highlight

yes indeed...this was a hot drop kid...you had some nice multiez and you had some funny shit up in there...and I agree that Alwayz Right line was pretty creative...

Thanks For The Responses, Its Appreciated : )

yeh wikid topic man, i think everyones captivated by those "mounds of flesh", nice start and topic,

these lines didnt really have solid rymhes in em:

"Its been said maybe im obsessed with the opposite sex, but
now women call me Carpenter...always waking up to Wood."

"with luck i'll discover the girl who'll stay true, make me change
& meet Mrs. Right, im just prayin her first name isnt "Always"

"nothing too wild, just a woman to call mine and give my heart
because women are wonderful creatures, presents from God."

pretty comical lines though. i liked it
peace out.

^ They rhyme in my accent, and i do audio so i suggest you listen to Nimrods 'Anthrax / Gas Tank' theory, and you'll see what i mean about them not having to rhyme exactly like "Hand / Sand" everytime.

yo..first off i wanna ask...are you x - biggs...abolish?

also thanks for the reply on my piece..just returning the favor.

well onto the piece...i am not thrilled about pieces on sex..but as it went on i realized it was more about you finding the love of your life.

"with luck i'll discover the girl who'll stay true, make me change
& meet Mrs. Right, im just prayin her first name isnt "Always""

^ dopest line without a doubt.

good stuff man...get back at me with the question.

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