i like the beat, first cat just needs to put more into the delivery, theres not enough energy - the hook is egh, it really could have used more emotion, some dubs, somethin to make it stand out.... second cat was better, could use some polishing but he stood out on the track... third cat made # 1 and 2 look like big and pac, just had no prescence, sounded freestyled in parts, unrehearsed iunno--work on how you put your words out cuz you sound unsure of where your goin and its not cool. keep doin it... thanks for the feedback before sorry it took so long to rtf.

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