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02-09-05, 10:32 AM
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GG Haterz
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Dabatos vs.
IP: CCA8 57B3
Check in's due before Thursday 11:59 PM Eastern Time Zone Verses Due Before Sunday 11:59 PM Eastern Time Zone Line Limit: 20-50 Lines Max First to 3 votes win 3-0 = KO Voting Ends Wendesday, Feb. 16 at 11 PM Eastern Time Zone You must vote in 2 other battles or you will not continue on into the next round. Topic: Ink on Paper
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me  ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. Last edited by Px : 02-10-05 at 07:18 PM. |
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02-10-05, 06:57 PM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: BF74 65F5
checkin in give us a topic and hopefully dabatos is gonna see this to topical...because px just said in complaints its going down
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02-10-05, 07:13 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: A931 29BE
check..................
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02-10-05, 08:22 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: A931 29BE
px pick a topic
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02-10-05, 08:27 PM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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Ink on Paper
IP: BF74 65F5
hand grabs the pen, feather hits paper when
mind stabs the aspen, bark retreats graspen the pen bleeds my mind, feathers word feeds the mind slow motion like play rewind, seein thoughts print so fine the blood so thick it shine, verbal scripture from shrine words comin from the heart, each beat writst contort minds driftin thru visions port, boat resembles my part diggin deep in the soul, my mind barrels the roll the ink spills lifes message, no bottle still on crests edge in between the line voyage, black ink smear whites edge my spirit in structure, like skin deep i puncture veins life i rupture, releasin lifes strain n pressure i wain for pleasure, tears hit page no composure energetic thoughts in entropy, pen compose life symphany poetic grace resembles melody, hittin page n flow in syncly forte so words are felt, exclamation point delt, showin black felt showin scar like lifes welt, energizin lines felt, structure tac belt eye lids swell liquid hits paper,focal points dwell on vaper skin gone showin epids layer, speakin father and oh savior confession on sins nature, all she said was please nurture i made her bone rapture, scitzo break and seaze lecture sent life last dinner, all i was givin was pen n paper thinkin fast n thinner, didnt think id die ten in paper with my last line spill my own ink on the pulp with my last line spill with one wink n the gulp drip, drip, drip... blood n ink make a master piece drip, drip, drip... blood n ink on my papers piece i dunno about this one how youll in terpret...but it was good for in a half hour
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02-10-05, 08:46 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: A931 29BE
well hope ur verse is good..i ain't reading it yet till i post mine cuz then i run out of ideas if i read urs...so good luck
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02-10-05, 09:08 PM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: C63E BF93
yeah you too man...i just need to keep writtin then ill get good again
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02-14-05, 02:02 AM
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IP: 6CB8 12EC
I can't believe you no-showed... Now i can't merk you.
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02-14-05, 09:42 AM
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GG Haterz
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IP: CCA8 57B3
Wow, this is disappointing.
Hells Fire wins due to no show. CLOSED
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For Anyone Who Wants to Talk to Me ^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly. |
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