5-40 line spit you first
no hate votes
no crew votes
all goes

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ill just spit first.............................

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check, i'll be spitting shortly. g' luck man. .................................................. ....

this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cuz i'll leave u cover in gore, but u couldn't win in a re-count
like face paint for maverik's games, i'll leave ya head black-n-blue
and have ur loss count equel the number of members that r wac-in-ur-crew (his crew has 1 member- him)
ur neck's shook. o n one is wat ur record will say-in-ur-next-look
cuz kid u must be gettin schooled, the way u beg-for-the-textbook (hes in this battle cuz he wants in on my crew- textbook)
i got u itchen so much its like im sendin lice-through-ur-back
u only got confidence wen u masturbate... u think u nice-wen-u-wac
u always contradict urself so voters will say-ur-the-worse
cuz retards r born from incest, but no one relates-to-ur-verse

waiten on u man

where the other cats verse ya'll??????????????????????????
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word, uppin for u to spit man. not impatient, jus don't want this to go to like the 4th page and be forgotten about. so, anyway, uppin for retard 101

uppi for ur verse again. lets get it up there so we can get some votes here finaly. uppin, lets go man.

uppin for ur verse again kid. come on, don't be a no show. jus get ur shit up here and let the best verse win.

yo while your waitin for his verse could you hit this up with an honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...785#post1130785
appreciate it

yo mic check/

you think you hard cause you started a crew/
but if i ran into you on the streets id beat the hell out of you/
id make your momma shrill when she looks at you/
everone in can kill you cause you aint shit/
im the retarded chosen one im the king/
i just found out that almost everone in your crew is only a minimal Age 14/
so i think you just need to get the FUCK out of R-and-B

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v/ - krakajack

I shouldn't even have to explain this but oh well...the mods force me to. Why vote Kracka? Much better verse. Even though it wasn't great...it was great compared to retards. Harder punches, was actually interesting, better personals. Im not going on any farther...it's pointless for me to do so. Both of your structures are messed by the way. Kracka...if you are going to explain your personals...explain em at the end, rather than during the verse.


Both return the favour and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thank You.

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yea, sorry, i don't have 100 posts so i can't vote on ur battle, otherwise i would. anyway, uppin for votes. no offense, but this shouldn't be that hard to vote on. uppin 1.

Krack

this battle will leave u covered in hives so u should jus bee-out
cuz i'll leave u cover in gore, but u couldn't win in a re-count
decent opening, kinda played but not a bad start, little bit of creativness too
like face paint for maverik's games, i'll leave ya head black-n-blue
and have ur loss count equel the number of members that r wac-in-ur-crew (his crew has 1 member- him)
not a bad punche, creative again and the personal was good, just dont explain it in ya verse next time
ur neck's shook. o n one is wat ur record will say-in-ur-next-look
cuz kid u must be gettin schooled, the way u beg-for-the-textbook (hes in this battle cuz he wants in on my crew- textbook)
wordplay was decent, personal was good just dont explain it in the punch again...good punch
i got u itchen so much its like im sendin lice-through-ur-back
u only got confidence wen u masturbate... u think u nice-wen-u-wac
lol..not bad wordplay once again, creative and a nice punch
u always contradict urself so voters will say-ur-the-worse
cuz retards r born from incest, but no one relates-to-ur-verse
decent closer to finish off ya pretty good verse


retard

you think you hard cause you started a crew/
but if i ran into you on the streets id beat the hell out of you/
bad opener, make ya punch more complex, this was plain and not a good hit..add metas and wordplay, even persoanls like kracka did
id make your momma shrill when she looks at you/
everone in can kill you cause you aint shit/
no rhyme at all, shit and you...rhyme=not there, sorry...not even a good punch if it did rhyme, make it more complex
im the retarded chosen one im the king/
i just found out that almost everone in your crew is only a minimal Age 14/
so i think you just need to get the FUCK out of R-and-B
first line didnt rhyme wit the rest, 2nd and 3rd rhyme wasnt that good, ages mean shit and ya 2nd line wasnt good cuz of that basic topic and ya third line wasnt a direct or even a punch at all, ohh and ya first wasnt a punch either

overall- kracka took this battle by a mile with his wordplay, harder hitting punches, personals and an all togethrer beter and more complex verse. Retard elevate and take a trip to Wackness Emergacny center, you need to work on alot of stuff and y ou can get help there

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ayt krakajack ripped this kid completely lol!!

retart ur 1 of the wackest mcs ive eva seen lol!!

u better just quit the rappin or do audio!!

i cant poll but vote on this here:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110484