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Old 05-18-09, 09:05 AM   #1
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Da Problem Child vs MurDaH187

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Old 05-18-09, 10:48 AM   #2
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Da Problem Child has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-18-09 10:48 AM.
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Old 05-18-09, 01:00 PM   #3
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Old 05-18-09, 01:42 PM   #4
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i will keep it basic for you...

its not fair, Ill treat you like a snare and beat you how a drummer do...
leave with holes so big that i could drive a hummer through...

A little rope around the neck, i hope you savin me a verse...
Ur better then the B.E.S.T? then i guess i'm whippin' the master, like slavery was reversed...

i'm bringin the pain, dead all the faking you carry around...
extinguish ya flame then shit on ya sacred burial ground!!...

Im critical, the pinnacle of intricit syllables...
you pitiful, the epitomy of typical similies...

So the next time you even try approachin me fag...
ima make ya casket a fuckin plastic grocery bag...
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Old 05-18-09, 02:20 PM   #5
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even if ya flow had "life" you couldnt keep it from dying
he has 5 wins from modz tired of his weeping and crying(atleast he's trying)
but if you're a baller, im da ref.....ill have you weezing for your breath
when i hit him wit a TECH and have him free throwing, "yes"
take baby steps, if you wanna battle the king, get ya gwop up
I take trips to greece, this dummy still thinks thats a hair product
im only 15, but have grown women buzzin now
he couldnt name a chic he fuckd, malesting you cuzin doesnt count(lol)
so kid, get ya weight up, im about 2 or 3 levels from you
cuz i spit MurDaH wit 1 line...u can say i [/B]8 7[/B] of u
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Old 05-18-09, 02:21 PM   #6
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even if ya flow had "life" you couldnt keep it from dying
he has 5 wins from modz tired of his weeping and crying(atleast he's trying)
but if you're a baller, im da ref.....ill have you weezing for your breath
when i hit him wit a TECH and have him free throwing, "yes"
take baby steps, if you wanna battle the king, get ya gwop up
I take trips to greece, this dummy still thinks thats a hair product
im only 15, but have grown women buzzin now
he couldnt name a chic he fuckd, malesting you cuzin doesnt count(lol)
so kid, get ya weight up, im about 2 or 3 levels from you
cuz i spit MurDaH wit 1 line...u can say i 8 7 of u
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Old 05-18-09, 09:47 PM   #7
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Vote up plez.............................................. .....................................
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Old 05-19-09, 08:23 AM   #8
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uppin......crazy flow!!...........................
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Old 05-19-09, 09:23 AM   #9
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First lines

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Originally Posted by Murdah
its not fair, Ill treat you like a snare and beat you how a drummer do...
leave with holes so big that i could drive a hummer through...

Quote:
Originally Posted by DaProblemChild
even if ya flow had "life" you couldnt keep it from dying
he has 5 wins from modz tired of his weeping and crying(atleast he's trying)


Murdah had the better of the two opening lines

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A little rope around the neck, i hope you savin me a verse...
Ur better then the B.E.S.T? then i guess i'm whippin' the master, like slavery was reversed...

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but if you're a baller, im da ref.....ill have you weezing for your breath
when i hit him wit a TECH and have him free throwing, "yes"


Of the two, I have to give it to Murdah again, I didnt really get DPC's

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i'm bringin the pain, dead all the faking you carry around...
extinguish ya flame then shit on ya sacred burial ground!!...

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Originally Posted by DaProblemChild
take baby steps, if you wanna battle the king, get ya gwop up
I take trips to greece, this dummy still thinks thats a hair product

This is where the battle started to change for me, wasnt feeling Murdahs, DPCs was a better punch so he gets it here

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Im critical, the pinnacle of intricit syllables...
you pitiful, the epitomy of typical similies...

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Originally Posted by DaProblemChild
im only 15, but have grown women buzzin now
he couldnt name a chic he fuckd, malesting you cuzin doesnt count(lol)

Didnt really like either lines, but DPC gets advantage, his was more of a punch, I got Murdahs but it was filler and seemed forced

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So the next time you even try approachin me fag...
ima make ya casket a fuckin plastic grocery bag...

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Originally Posted by DPC
so kid, get ya weight up, im about 2 or 3 levels from you
cuz i spit MurDaH wit 1 line...u can say i 8 7 of u


Gotta give it to DPC that was a creative line, although bolding was gay, it was definitely the better of the finishing lines


Vote - DPC - Murdah had me in the begining but it was downhill from his 3rd line imo
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Old 05-19-09, 10:48 AM   #10
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Good honest vote loving it good looks and good brake down.......

I didn't get he's last bar till I re-read it twice then it hit me....

Good job child should of went a bit harder instead of slacking off near the end....
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Old 05-19-09, 02:08 PM   #11
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thankx uppin........................................
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Old 05-21-09, 02:18 PM   #12
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can we get some votes like soon...................
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Old 05-21-09, 02:28 PM   #13
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Word upp'in for more votes..........................................
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Old 05-25-09, 08:05 AM   #14
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Problem took this just, elevation with your multis for both of you on this so props.I see more effort from both sides.
Overall it was quite an even battle.
But the hair product line split it for me.

Nice work.

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Old 05-26-09, 08:28 AM   #15
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