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01-21-05, 04:53 PM | #1 | |||||
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Optimus Vs. Yung Duke
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Battles Go Up Friday Check In Due Sunday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Verses Due Tuesday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time Voting Ends Thursday By 11:59 PM Eastern Time 20 Lines Minimum 40 Lines Maximum No Biting No Recycling Do Not Go Over The Line Limit Or Under The Line Limit Meaning No Less Than 20 Lines No More Than 40 Lines You Must Vote On 3 Battles Per Week And Edit Them Into Your Check-In.. If You Dont Do So, Youre Banned From The Tourney The Following Week Topic: Delinquency
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01-21-05, 09:35 PM | #2 | ||||
Spiritual Respiration
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Check check check
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01-22-05, 05:13 AM | #3 | |||
Picasso Of Poetry
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Cizech....
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01-25-05, 07:45 PM | #4 | ||||
Spiritual Respiration
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IP: C7EE 5FCD
Once again i take advantage of the creativitie allowed to be used in topicals and made a story out of it. Though the plot of the story is basically dumb. If you wanna know the derection i was goin wit my topical, I was showin wat they see as a delinquent, and what we know they see as a delinquent. like two completely Different definitions. So i wrote the exact same verse twice but from two different sides.
~Yung Duke~ Marty Houston: Hello ladies and gentlemen I'm Marty Houston, and welcome to social debate, the show where Representatives of different era's literally battle it out to get their point across about their views of a problem the went on or is going with one of the two era's. Today we have The Emcee Yung Duke representing the ever so dangerous "New Era". and the man to my right has never rapped before in his life but Decided he'll five it a try. You know him as the reason Gore isnt in his second term right now; Representing the 60's and 70's Era, Jeb Bush. Tonights problem will come from the New Era. The Topic is Teenage Delinquency. We flipped a coin backstage and decided Jeb will go first. Dj spin the track and Jeb state your facts... Jeb Bush: Yo, Check 1-2, Shout out to the homie George Dubya. The cops are the victims they need our help, can you here them callin/ These youths that are robbin and killin are the reason our economies’ fallin/ Goin to school disrespectin adults and then blamin it on them/ No respect for human life, only interested in savin their skin/ We tried to be nice but their attitudes cause us to use force to restrain them/ Their the down fall of this country so we’ll build more jails to contain them/ Using swear words at the age of five, sooner to pick up a gun than their own fist/ What happened when they use to call the law and let them solve it/ First words out of their mouth is I’ll shoot em’ if they try that with me/ They do things to destroy their own people and call it victory/ Don’t follow laws set up to protect them they do what they want on their own / Role models are men who classify women as a derogatory term/ Though they are the ones who raised them and gave them birth/ These delinquents of the world are the scum of the Earth/ Holler... Marty Houston: not bad for a first timer, lets see if you can counter some of his facts Yung Duke. Dj. hit it. Yung Duke: yo first of all Fuck Bush, Bill Clinton for life. yo, check, yo. The Police never once tried to help us, they’ll soon as much rather see us gone/ There’s a glitch in the economic syetem, stealin is why we survived this long/ Where already expected to fail to them, teachers see us as paychecks instead of students/ Why shouldn’t I save myself, no one else cares about me enough to do it/ I trust the government?, they’re partly responsible for leavin my people deprived/ They need someone to blame for the downfall of the U.S, and fear an intellectual uprise/ Age five is old enough for dealers to stop me and offer to sell me work/ So its also old enough to curse and learn to shoot before they shoot first/ So yea try something wit me and I’ll shoot, that’s something I don’t even need to say/ Its not about destroyin life, the victory is livin to see another day/ And you aint never gonna see me following rules to make me just another puppet/ And we see them men on the TV havin money in the hood and we love it/ And there’s a difference between any other female, and the one that had me/ So you can call us scum, but we keep this place runnin smoothly and happily/ Marty Houston: Well our voters have spoken and it seems Yung Duke is the winner. Jeb Bush: Shit, where the fuck are my ballot counting people when i need them.
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01-26-05, 12:01 AM | #5 | |||||
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Young Duke wins by no show.
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