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Old 06-16-09, 02:14 AM   #1
Young Kidd (LM)
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Best I Ever Had

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I Know You Think I'm PLaying Games,
Baby I Aint In To That,
I Just Wanna Make It Last.
Can You Help Assemble That?
Yea.
Cuz Really I'm A Simple Cat,
Not Without Intelligence,
But Every Time You Stepping In
My Words Just Start Stumbling,
Like You Was Steady Tripping Them,
Damn.
But You Do It With A Humble Style,
Like You Aint Even Gotta Talk,
What You WEaring Talking Loud,
Oww, Cupid Must Of Cliched Us,
Cuz Im a Peasant To tHe World.
Your Royalty, Thats Obvious.
But I Would Still Lobby Us, Cuz This
Love Is Like Politics,
Compromise Alot Of Shit,
But Working For Our Happiness.
And You Aint Waiting After Hits,
So You Know We'll Go Platinum.
Damn...And I Really Hope You tHe one to Sign Me.
We can Start A group Together,
I Aint Thinking Solo Always,
Huh..You Can Be Me Singing Partner,
Lets Just Do a Duet.Yea I choose No other.
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Old 06-16-09, 12:52 PM   #2
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this is my dudes actual song lol

big up
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Old 06-16-09, 01:26 PM   #3
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im' sorry, but drake killed this. hard to do a remix to. but still big ups for respectin the song enough to know its worth jumpin on. i'm thinkin bout doin the remix of the still fly remix drake did
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Old 06-16-09, 01:28 PM   #4
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still dope. but yo i think ya vocal's a little low. or ya mic aint clear enough on this
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Old 06-16-09, 02:17 PM   #5
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it is kinda low. i noticed it this morning. lol
imma go turn those bitches up
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Old 06-16-09, 02:20 PM   #6
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I Know You Think I'm PLaying Games,
Baby I Aint In To That,
I Just Wanna Make It - last
Can You Assemble That?
Yea.
Cuz Really I'm A Simple Cat,
Not Without Intelligence,
But Every Time You Stepping In
My Words Start Stumbling,
Like You Was Steady Tripping Them,
haha.
You Do It With A Humble Style,
You Aint Even Gotta Talk,
What You WEaring Talking Loud,
WOW - Cupid Cliched Us,
Im a Peasant To tHe World.
You' re Royalty, I'ts Obvious.
But I Would Still Lobby Us,
Love Is Like Politics,
I'd Compromise Alot Of Shit,
Working For Our Happiness.
n You Aint even After Hits,
but You Know We'd Go Platinum.
Damn...And I Really Hope You Sign Me.
We can Start A group Together,
I Aint Thinking Solo - Always,
Huh..You Can Be Me Singing Partner,
Lets Just Duet (do-it).cus you the fuckin best.
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Old 06-16-09, 02:21 PM   #7
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i just made your verse 3x better
watch ya syllables dog and a few pauses and word changes to annunciate punchlines in what you wrote....

word i edit like a beast
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dad said, son you're fucking high
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Old 06-16-09, 02:30 PM   #8
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bwah you did make it 3 times better.
fuck you! lol
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Old 06-16-09, 02:35 PM   #9
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sarcasm? can't tell
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well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high
and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything
so i took my old man's advice
three sad semesters
it was only fifteen grand spent in bed
i thought about the army
i dropped out and joined a band instead


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Old 06-16-09, 02:46 PM   #10
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its hard to tell with text right. nah.
actually i was stuck on some parts.
and the pauses help me haha.

i might use some of it. thanks my nig ha
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