10 - 12 lines

no dr
no crew ect.

you go first

Im out, if your verse is here tomorrow I'll reply.
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so your a true soldja are ya?//
take a look in the mirror and you'll see a true idiot//
why dont ya stick to drug dealin ya wont make anythin from rap//
and you from ottawa that makes you even more crap//
so ya like 4play huh, is that just another way of sayin i like 4skin//
ya best get a donor card ya gonna need to give ya organs to ya next of kin//
1986 was a real bad year, even worse was 2002 when ya started out//
ya verses are wack they sound like ya jus cleaned ya toilet out//
you a 6ft tall white rappin piece of trash//
ya better off gettin a sex change and sellin yo ass fo cash//
id get ODB to buy ya its the closet ya will come to fame//
ive just stood on this souldja ant, hes worthless and now outta that game//

explanation:

line 3:says that his occupation is drug dealin
line 4ttawa is where hes from
line 5:says his interest is 4play
line 7:1986 when he was born 2002 when he started out
line 9:a profile of himself


ma structure is way off but fuck it, hurry up and spit

^^^^that was supposed to just say ottawa i forgot about the smilies n shit.............................................. .................................................. .

This a battle but I swear it could be a comedy,
You either a shitty rapper or a drama-queen,
It aint hard ta tell its just some simple math,
You so fuckin wack u make my dimples laugh,
Get burned so bad u could light ma fire,
Say ya got the skill but you quite the liar,
You may have punches but it always misses,
Your more annoying thenna little kids lisp is,
Yeah Im canadian... Ya think thats funny EH?
Your SHIT couldnt be 'hot' onna sunny day,
Its like rocks fallin when this dummy flows,
My 'punches' connect n then u getta bloody nose,

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True got dis one, his flows were better he had better punches, better wordplay..... good battle though............


could u plz hit up these ones

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104859
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104412

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can we get some votes up in here...................................

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can we get some votes up in here...................................

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i reckon gio got this one he came more personal than the other cat but soldja had a better flow and structure and i think gio's vocab was better than soldja's and his punches were as well

vote:adagio

vote doesnt count. -feeble

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