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Old 11-28-06, 12:24 PM   #1
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Exclamation GhoStLy RhYmez (Sik Shit)

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I Cause Conditions That Have Ya Wishin It Can Be Fixed With A Aid Kit
My Mission Is Similiar to My Intentions, "Not Letting You Make It"

So Take it Wisely And Wise Up Before The Clock Drops And Times Up
I Push weight And Do Coke But thAts not Why My "Linez Tough"

I was Raised with Heat And Thats Cuz My Momz Couldnt Afford Gas n Light
My Bro Sais My Glock Studders But Only Becus i Shot the Same Bastard Twice

I Make My Point With A Quick Inverse and Thats Cuz i Failed Math
Ghost Is quick To Put Domes On A price,So I guess i Sh0uld Start To Sell Hats

I Walk With A Eager To Kill As i Pass Enemies Who Wish Me Death
No Prositute But Im Onda Corner Of The Block if u Wish to get me next

Im A Threat To Many People And They Dare To Speak My Name
Probably Cuz The Only Time u Mention it Is When u Explaining Something Strange

( just getting back in my text game so Holla)

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Old 11-28-06, 12:29 PM   #2
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upping for feed no mind the other copy haha UPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 11-29-06, 11:42 AM   #3
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upping for feed stop the bullshit..............
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Old 11-29-06, 12:22 PM   #4
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Overall I liked it. I like the first couple bars the most cuz it seemed like it would piss someone off and Ive seen a lot of people try to use the coke thing in their rhymes but none of them got it right but I think you nailed it. Nice lil flow ya did there.
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Old 11-29-06, 12:24 PM   #5
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good looks bro upzzz.....
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Old 11-30-06, 11:49 AM   #6
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uppin for some feed on this.........
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Old 11-30-06, 12:05 PM   #7
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I liked it, nice flow and Vocabulary went well with the structure.
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Old 11-30-06, 04:00 PM   #8
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good looks upping...................
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Old 12-01-06, 11:11 AM   #9
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feed.............
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Old 12-02-06, 04:34 AM   #10
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If you take the "Sik" out of the part in brackets, then you will have my feedback.
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Old 12-05-06, 11:48 AM   #11
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man nigga just drop some feed..........................
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Old 12-05-06, 11:53 AM   #12
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Nope. You see, I am done with trying to critique people. I fucking drop honest feedback and just because sometimes I rag on a piece because it generally is just trash, most fuckers get all protective and start talking shit to me.

And, I really don't have the time to talk shit with internet dudes.
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Old 12-05-06, 11:56 AM   #13
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NICE FLOW i LIKED IT
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Old 12-05-06, 11:56 AM   #14
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if u aint gonna give feed then cool uppin for some honest feedback.
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