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Old 02-22-06, 08:02 PM   #1
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this was originally a collab but i changed it up....this is jsut a lil trakk i put together, its called "walk away"

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http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pag...m?bandID=468135
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Old 02-22-06, 08:37 PM   #2
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betas not my thing but..it's nice....hype shit......quality is pritty good...you sound young...u got nice flow....adlibs is nice...presence n emotion is hot....

good job on this man...nice shit..hollidy line was nice too..

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Old 02-23-06, 12:39 AM   #3
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*litsening as I type*

I'm liking this man. Flow is tight.....so are the punches. This is an all around good track man.....keep it up ™
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Old 02-23-06, 01:23 AM   #4
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the beat is nice ...clean...little production tricks..panning the scratch in the beginning ......!
i dont know where youre comin from ...you sound good ...as far as what youre rapping about..i would have to say you are 14 -16 years old...but you are on point...stay on the beats well...it has flow .... good job...keep it up ...!
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Old 02-24-06, 01:29 PM   #5
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beat is coo

flow is standard...nothing major one way or the other


need more presence in your voice and/or production


not bad dawg


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Old 02-25-06, 01:36 PM   #6
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Listening...

Beat is decent...not really feeling it.

Quality is pretty good.

Flow...is ehh...it's on beat but it's pretty basic. Delivery is up and down...some points it's good, but it sounds lacking in other spots. Lyrics are pretty good. Definetely with work you can be good.

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Old 02-26-06, 02:30 AM   #7
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dope track...

emotion is dope

Quality is pretty good

overall good track homie, word
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Old 02-26-06, 04:42 AM   #8
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your voice is good, u got a great enthusiastic/pretty much professional rapping voice even tho u sound fairly young, and your flow is great and suits the instrumental well
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nice track nice Flow ur pretty Good u Flow like my boi Illness nice quality get at me one day for a Collab aight? ahhaa o and on the track u left me feed on i didnt think i needed emotion since its a lyrical track but thankz for the Feedback

nice shit tho keep it up aght
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Old 02-27-06, 07:05 AM   #10
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aiight first off U sound mad young its kinda distracting,,.,,beats pretty nice flows above average very smooth lyrics r average content come up lyrics could be tightened up somewhat U got a lil swag and cockyness thats good and the emotion is good thats a plus there alone just work on uppin ya content and come a lil more agressive

feed used 2/27 "H1p Hop (Beat by Wez Nilez)"
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