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02-22-06, 04:13 PM
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*****GangstaShit*****Featuring Cho~~~~~~The Exclusive jump off
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LINKS:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222939 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222953 checked
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02-22-06, 04:20 PM
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Get Ya Ears Ready For Some Crack Bitches
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02-22-06, 04:42 PM
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who said whatttttttttttttttttt !!?!?!?!?! lol
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02-22-06, 05:07 PM
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feelin the verses here
1st cat's flow was acceptable CHO...some good lines in there...flow worked...not the best I've heard from you, but acceptable. Tony...sounds like u were ready to explode on this track...lol...I think u held back some was good tho not bad homies 1 |
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02-22-06, 05:41 PM
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yeah ...yo this track is def fat, creative genius at its finest... cho stay hard flowin ... tony self comes through wicked and the voice is smooth as the flows...
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02-22-06, 06:09 PM
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Liking the intro! Beat is sweet. Im feeling the 1st guy! flow is cool!.....2nd guy is flowing good, good lyrics, nice delivery which helps his presence! 3 guy dope! flow is sweet slow n nice, presence and delivery both on par with good lyrics! a nice track 8/10 |
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02-22-06, 07:56 PM
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^yea the intro is nice...
...i gotta listen in lo-fi but it kinda sounds like the first verses wualtiy might need work, cant exactly tell tho, flyriks, flow, and delivery is nice in first verse, good emotion too...2nd verse (quality thing must jsut be my lo-fi shit), similar flow to the first verse, still good flow, lriks, and delivery, lol at some fo the stuff...3rd verse definitly ahs an original flow and is different from the other two, im likin this flow, nice delivery, lyriks are pretty nice too...thsi song is nice, propz btw, could yall plz rtf http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=222977 Last edited by eastcoast : 02-22-06 at 08:12 PM. |
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02-23-06, 06:23 PM
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word thnx for the feed man
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02-25-06, 01:57 AM
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02-27-06, 12:10 AM
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Uppppppppppppppppppppppppp
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02-27-06, 08:50 AM
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1st persons flow is horrible. u need alot of work on dat. but lyrics r str8. u sound like mr. cheeks. hook is wack. 2nd person is trash. U need to improve on ur flow just like the first dude. i wasn't feelin ur lyrics at all. 3rd dude is da same shit. u all need to work on ya flow. on ya tracks and ur rhymes alot more. if this shit came on the radio i would change the station. u need to find a way to keep the listeners wantin more. work on that.
overall.. i would give it a 4.5/10 dont take it as negative critisism. take it as motivation to tremendously elevate.
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02-27-06, 01:21 PM
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LOLOLOL man..............thats no jus "ill bill" thats THEE ILL BILL....from NON PHIXION u stupid fuck.....so hate on him all u want he's famous....... so umm...yea maby calling you a "hater" is ummmmm not justified??? lol.....why who u gona call wack next ? jedi mindtricks....i got a track w big and bis too...wana leave feed to them ????
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02-27-06, 05:27 PM
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aight......
intros dope.... throw back 1st verse: ILL AS BILL IS! dope touch addin dude 2nd verse: LOL... cho you never dissapoint wit metaphors and creative lyrics... had me have to rewind this a few times to grasp the depth of some of the ish you were saying... but thats what Good Music does to ya... so DOPE... 3rd: Tony... comin wit mad energy... flow was smooth on this... "forever hold the wieght"... no doubt!... trigger finger itches like a bad rash??? haha... yall niggas did it here mayne... keep that fiya comin for the Mixtape feed used 2/27 "Mushu Da Pimp"
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02-27-06, 06:43 PM
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this track brings me back to the mid 90's.....
1st verse....dunno if it was the mixin or the dudes mic, but that quality is off from the rest of the song...good dilivery but strays from beat at points...kinda makes it hard to follow along hook...i like the scratching, suites the beat nicely...gives it more of a grimey feel 2nd verse...this guy has a edgy voice i like it on the track...lyrics were nice, but all over the place 3rd verse....haha kinda sounds like tha fat guy from jurassic 5, nice verse, only critisizm is the opening and the close....the opening seemed like it was squeezed in on the beat...and the closing, well lacked a closing...didnt really end the verse, just sounded like you had more to say but ran out of time.... pretty good song, minor details needed to be fixed but nothing major...some pretty damn good stuff for this site...7.5/10
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03-08-06, 11:51 AM
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E-Style, Bitch.
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Listnin right now
the first verse sounded like a young mos def I dunno who the first verse is but its dope the hook is some old school shit too, Not much I can fault on this track, I aint mad at it ''I hate everyone, I aint prejudice'' Sounds dope in audio ^ This is hot tho..Keep it up.
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