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Old 03-18-06, 12:44 AM   #1
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 03-18-06, 12:51 AM   #2
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peeping "Talkin Shit" aiight first thing beats dope...production is ok but U got to much high end on ya vox man U dig? flows ok stiff at some points but I can see U being nice in a few years,,,,content is pretty solid lyrics could be improved delivery and voice could be improved more emotion in ya voice might help not sure....
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Old 03-18-06, 01:05 AM   #3
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damn
I just put talkin shit on there like literally 60 seconds ago
but thanks for the feedback
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If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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Old 03-23-06, 03:40 PM   #4
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"world of war"

beat is cool... nice story telling mood..

this was actually pretty decent for someone who has never been to Iraq... kool how ya did the comparison with Iraq and the hood... kinda attempts to justify the shyt going on in da hood though (not a good thing)... but ya flow was better than ya normal and ya production is really starting to get better... i still got that track that you and i did... i can send ya the vocals if ya still wanna do that extra mix... but yeah... kool track man.... you starting to evolve
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