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Old 03-20-04, 09:53 AM   #1
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just stuff

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2 many dimension 2 mention/
my game iz full of extension/
treat weak spitters like cancer/
i send em into remission/
on a mission 2 B da best/
i gots nothin 2 prove/
my rhymes speak 4 they self/
hand signals 4 da deaf/
rappers droppin their books/
N losin their lesson/
stop stressin..time 2 start...class is now N session/
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Old 03-20-04, 12:02 PM   #2
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it was ok not great not shit. work n the flow a bit n up the wordin. keep it up though
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Old 03-22-04, 04:22 PM   #3
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damm...deff needs work...close to wack dawg....you need to make the lines longer and the words more complex...keep each ine wid da same silabols and use some mulit' and it will work beta....nice try tho..pz
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Old 03-22-04, 04:49 PM   #4
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this is what you get from me the finger and thats it you aint got nothing even me is better than you punk
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