YOU think im just babblen.... jabberen-about battlen-
but dont see the topic peep the pattern-
im out of the world ....listening to NEPTUNES in a SATURN.
consumed with words that lume-
everything i say hot.......
my words submerge with the perfume of toxic fumes.
laughs lather with mustard gas-
how you spit shit when you a half ass?
you next..... and im the sequel to Final Destination-
you equally corny with a wack infatuation-
the type to say im garabage........
then write using my cd for inspiration.
lets pause for clarification-make it clear-
you see through and couldnt hang if you were a shandalear.
rip you wit complex text or basic-
kick your ass so hard your rectoms' endorsed by asics.
with no lyrical vision,make a decision to see an optomotrist-
before this lyricist rips you a new ass like a cock~eyed proctologist.
aknowledge this......
i know most of my rhymes disscus battle-
cause i fight for the mic and tackle-
turn your mans to a dyke mastering a style you cant grapple.
so yeah i have an ego like van diesel dont be jealous-
i replace my hate to make room for being overzealous.
i sub~ject rappers to subject matter-in the form of a weak blatter-
cause i shit on you like i just ate a laxative platter.
my felonous complex-fire with bullets as an occomplice-
with 3 synonyms words causing herbs death........
kill, murder, and noncentz.
99 out of a 100 aint true-and dont due-what you claim too-
a remake fake-and im the remix of the cause of death that killed you.
speak and first person-the verse version- is for a discription-
so you can remember who you are and apply for schitzo prescriptions.
the most complext content coated with incriptions-
coded to leave you distorted
word is born aborted contorded from mic fiend addiction.
so say what you gotta but centz is in the mix like juice-
produce- tight rhymes constant cause you'd fall off if i let loose.
you serve no use-you dont flow you doosh-
ill eat you and beat any fan dumb enough to give your album a push.

I Like This Its My New Style

thought you used some good wordplay, and carried it thry pretty constant, ya had some nice vocab here too.... i like the new style, in places the transition seemed a bit choppy, but mostly, it was smooth and flowed nice..... keep it up twin....

dis was nice...i like da new stlye....flow was good......wordplay was ok but could be betta.....good alround!!!!!keep it up bro.....!!
:-)

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i think this one of my better works

Uppin

uppin

Damn homie...new style but no new news....jus the same as all ur otha pieces...dopeness, the vocab in there was tight....ur wordplay was hot also, ur flow was on point through the whole drop n u jus keep gettin betta...had sum tight ass lines 2
Fav line:laughs lather with mustard gas-
how you spit shit when you a half ass?
^^that line right there had me rollin homie

wut can i say...keep spittin sum dope shit...hopefully one day ill be as good as u

Peace

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fuck what anyone says...this shit was hot. Nigga you got skills .I bet you rap foreal..come to the cypher and get yo ass beat

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Biggie was always better than Pac, ready to die vs tupacolypse now which was better