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Old 02-15-06, 10:00 PM   #1
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i pulled out one of my old mics and was like i'm bored lets record a track.....well anyways...if you leave feed i will leave feed back..


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Old 02-15-06, 10:07 PM   #2
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I actually really like this beat... piano and all... really laid back type feel... and you came over the top of it with a pretty relaxing flow... liked that aspect of this... not bad... the hook was aight, didn't feeling the singing too much though... flow was pretty on point... lyrically wasn't really that blaze... "on top of the vaccum" <~~~ yay that had me like why would you say that? anyway over all this was cool for like a lil laid back jon to mellow things back out on a demo/mixtape

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Old 02-15-06, 10:10 PM   #3
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yeah thanks for the feed

this is the incomplete track i'm waiting for our backround singer too get on this...hes gonna sing it up really good make it sound 2000 times better
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Old 02-15-06, 10:17 PM   #5
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lol aight rey i got you right now fam
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Old 02-15-06, 10:55 PM   #6
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this is nice, i'm really feeling the beat, think i can get it too use it? i don't like the echo effect at some points, but it is nice....good job, nice flow...some parts your voice did seem like you were signing under your breath...rtf in my open mic, the shadow behind me son
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Old 02-15-06, 10:59 PM   #7
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Ok i got you man...

but yeah ill let you use the beat
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Old 02-15-06, 11:13 PM   #8
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ok hit me up on aim or msn....thanks past
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Old 02-16-06, 04:11 PM   #9
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aight aight aight...

aight you got the right to talk shit... but be easy shit aint fiya

good beat i guess i really aint in to know 1991 ll cool j type shit you know that lovin shit but its decent for that comin in clear delivery is dope too good flow and you writen lyrics like the rest of da cats on this site.. but still dog 7/10

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Old 02-16-06, 07:42 PM   #10
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word i feel you man

bad mic i got right now it'll be better in a week or so

thanks for the feed

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its iiiight. i would give it a 7/10. hook is str8. we should battle in doin a love track. that'd b fun. but it's iight. 1 P.S. - As always, fuck dem PSA niggas! 1
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what beat is dat? if it's an original beat i'd wanna fucc wit it. let me know. I'll turn dat into a hit quicc. 1
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beat:8...oo..datz dat slow ish..oooweee
flow:8.5
hook:8
enjoyment:8

man i liked it man......dis dat song for da ladiez fa sho and i was really feelin' it....u culd get sum chickz wit dis one..lol
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Old 02-17-06, 03:48 PM   #14
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alright i'm upppin
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Old 02-18-06, 12:03 PM   #15
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yeah..uppin..again
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