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Old 05-17-05, 01:14 AM   #1
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Aurora Sky vs. Daubs

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Old 05-18-05, 11:15 AM   #2
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check'.................
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Old 05-18-05, 11:24 AM   #3
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check............
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Old 05-18-05, 11:44 AM   #4
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Shame to say, but is really happnin man, so this aint just a threat....
And even if ya repped a gang of daddys boys.... you couldnt be a sunset!!

sorry i have to explain but....
daddys boys = son
gang = set
aura sky = sunset.

dont take ages man, its only 2 lines.
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Old 05-19-05, 12:36 PM   #5
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Daubs a big herb, and thats a fact kid, his raps suck like his sigg work so son pass the tactics, and you only 'livin legends' cuz people heard ya verse and 'died' 'laughin' at it !-/
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Old 05-19-05, 12:51 PM   #6
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Old 05-19-05, 01:03 PM   #7
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Nothing really stood out here.

Daubs - went into too much detail with the explaination. It wasnt even that good of a punchline man. Pretty basic.

Aurora - your concept was pretty good. although your lines were fucking stretched like hell. you got my vote this time for havin a dope punch, but if you fail to fix your extended line problem next round, I will not vote on you battle, cause its wack.

V/Aurora.......................
 
Old 05-19-05, 02:16 PM   #8
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Vote: Daubs

Close battle but Daubs I think had better wordplay and meaning behind it. Also had a harder hit
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your not even in the league yet..so ?....
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Old 05-19-05, 02:20 PM   #10
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o yea and didnt know we had to vote on 4 battles so heres the other 2..

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191103
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191104
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Old 05-19-05, 04:05 PM   #12
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Daubs Had A Better Line I Think Shit Was A Name Play And Wordplay Couldve Been Worded Much Better Though Overall Had A Decent Effect Auoras Was Garbage So Streched It Was Horrible Looked Like A Book No Multis To Flow It Punch Was Way Off It Wasnt Goo
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Old 05-19-05, 05:56 PM   #13
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^- lol cali a hater since i beat him...ever since i was kronuz he's hated on me.... :/
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1-1.............
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Old 05-20-05, 12:34 PM   #15
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WTF!!!!!

one = weak
the other = weak, stretched

daubs had a personal punch on the name with a weak attempt at wordplay

aurora sky had some filler, stretched lines, and the punch is not really that affective, cuz if everyone died from hearin his punch then YEAH it makes him LIVIN, but not a LEGEND, so the punch is only half-effective!!!!

V/ - Daubs
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