Cracks Of Lightning. . The Bass Of Thunder. . Wicked Laughter. . Blessful Hums. . All Heard At The Same Time. Then, A More Lighthearted And Loveable Voice Is Heard. . He Proclaims Himself As God. . And Begins To Speak. . .

As I Bring Light To The Dark Nights, Might To The Weak
I Write What I Speak, N I Teach The Meak To Be Unique
I Stand Above, As The Watchful Eye, Botch Those Cries
Understand You Have To Die, It's Plan Between Me, Myself, and I
As Long You Say Your Prayers, Believe, You Shall Acheive -
Happiness, But If You Don't You Won't Be Able To Leave
The Hell In Which You'll Succumb To, No Where Run, You -
Better Be Attentive Before Ya Non Exsist Brain Fools-
Yourself Into Thinking You'll Get By With All Those Sins
Don't Listen To Your Friends, What YOU Do Only Matters In The End
So Begin To Win The Light That'll Brighten Up Your Life
I'll Strike With Use Of Bloody Sight Upon Those Not Right
I'm The Man Who Hovers, Brothers N Sisters, I See Things Clearly
So Correct Your Wrongs Along This Path, Or Suffer Dearly

A Deeper, More Darker And Sinister Voice Interrupts. .

Ain't Seen You In A While, That Shit Ain't All It's Cracked Up Be
You've Ruptured These - Minds, N Over Time, You Have Corrupted Thee
You Can't Be Trusted See, Darkness Is Where The Happy Dwell
It's Not A Cell, It's A Barrier - A Carrier To Afterlife With No Spells
No Wickedness, No Need For Words To Bring The Upliftment
Jus The Friendship Shared Throughout - Heaven Is Jus A Clout Of Shit
Many Need To Realize This, The Lies Told With You're Holy Tongue
Mean Not A Thing, For I Have Overcome N Became The Only One
To Know How This World Is, Shitty, I Mean - Really God. .
Planes Thrashed The Towers, You Crashed After Hours -
Of Questions Like "Is There Really A God?", Now I Hold The Power
So You Need To Focus, As The Words From My Ophis Spread
The Smoke-Pressed Atmosphere Is Clear, I've Been Chosen Instead

God Sighs. . Seemingly Distraught As To What Satan Has Had To Say. . But He Retorts. .

Do You Plan To Bring Joy? Or Stricken Earth's Victims With Damnation?
All I Foresee Is Frustration On This Nation N People Losing Patientence
What Do You Promise To Accomplish Without Harm Or Malice?
I Know For You, No Fire-Use Will Surely Present A Challenge
You Neither Have The Talent Nor Ability To Control This Earth
It's Been A Giving For Me To Prove My Worth Since My Birth
N I've Done Exactly That, The Churches Are Now Crowded With -
Parents, Who Now Praise Even Though They Doubted This As Kids
Do You Not Have The Clearest Vision To See What I Have Given?
You Are Not Forgiven For The Sins N Hellashish Acts That Lacked Wisdom
Do You Not Comprehend The Position You Put Yourself In?
You're Just Selfish, Selfless, Only It It For Your Self Again -
I Can't Believe This Could Be In The End

Satan Laughs A Wicked Laugh . . And Proceeds To Stake His Claim. .

So I Have Won This By Submission? Haha, You're Just Like The Hu-mans
Puny As Fuck, I Don't Need Permission To Take Over N Kill You-Man
You're Right, I'm Going Break The Earth's Back Into Pieces, HELL!
Make You, God, Look Like Napoleon Did When His Empire Fell
Turn You Into A Battle-Worn General, I Shoot Subliminals
And Get The Bug In The Ears Of Criminals, I'm Not Killin Um
They're Doing Good, It's The People That Kiss Your Ass That I Hate
Make No Mistake, This Shit'll Be Great When I Place You're Good On A Stake
Every Nail I Hammer Will Represent A Notch Into The Death Of You
I'm Hell Bent On My Intent To Push Your Condition To Critical
God, This Can't Be Considered A Struggle, For I Hold More Reign
I Feel You Going Insane, You're Brain Can't Maintain -
Or Function The Same Without The Constant Mention Of Your Name
You're Through, Kiss This All Goodbye, And Have A Seat
Admit To Defeat, It's Truely Hell On Earth As We Cease To Speak

A Lightning Bolt Is Heard Striking Down. . Then God Makes One Final Plea. .

You Will Not Take This Away From Me, I'll Fight Until I Can Longer Stand
You've Never Been A Man, And You'll Never Run This Land, Forget Your Plans

How Foolish Can One Be? One Thing You Obviously Don't Know
Is The Reality Shows With Me, You Have To Relie On Glow

I Condemn Thee, Hell Hath No Fury Like My Raging Scorn
This Has Been Mine Since I Was Born, They Don't Need To Mourn

You'll Never Be Able To Conquer The Proper Leader, Face It
You Can't Replace Shit About To Happen N Ya Can't Take It

As Long As Breaths Do Not Vacate My Chest, I Will Continue
Discend Upon You With Such Vengeance Till I've Rid Of You

You Can Never Rid Of Evil, EVIL IS FOREVER ALIVE!
I Must Fight, Try To Pry You Away, Gotta Prevent This Lie. . .

The Ultimate Power Struggle Is Upon Us. . . .

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Mentill And Dez- Relationships
Skiddz- Time
Token Feat. Edicius- Envious Hate

This Is The Best Piece I've Written In A While. . Got This Idea All Of A Sudden N I Jus Ran With It. . Keyed The Whole Thing In About 30 Minutes Maybe. .

Satan Is Talking In BOLD
God Is Regular Writing.

Feedback Appreciated.

-Formula.

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i thought it was a good piece .........................keep it up

^ ^ ^

Honestly. . What The Fuck Was That? If You're Going To Leave Feedback, Make It Worth Something, Not Jus Another Reply To Up Your Post Count. . Silly Herb.

-Formula.

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hahaha we have a real gangster here o no im really skerd now............................sike

This was a real good piece here man....i liked how you did this it was something i havent seen in here really....liked how you took god's side and satan's side of things, it was really good...everything in this seemed really good, i enjoyed the whole thing, it was long but it is really worth the read i think...you had me hooked in this as i was reading it, you made me wanna keep reading, good job at that...your flow, multies, and vocab were real nice, cant complain about that...everything seemed pretty solid in this...made a good read...Keep At That Man.

Spec - Learn To Spell, Then I'll Take You Seriously.

Masta- Thanks For The Feed.

Everyone Else- Gimmie Some Fuckin Feedback, I Know Ya'll Read Shit Longer Than This. . .

-Formula.

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Man, chill out, replies will come in time.. You'll get slept on a little bit on any site you're on, it just takes patience.

hahaha its not my fault you dont like my slang herb

Yo Man That was Tight....Ya Structure was different with the Bold and shit but it was good...Ya Always have good structure.....the way ya Made the side of good and evil it was good something I have neva seen.....so tha topic was Good...Ya Flow was one of the best things in it.....Tha Whole Thing was a good read...the longer the Better i think because it turns out to be better in the end......ya had multis that always good to see theres not many around in open mics Anymore.....all and all the best read i have Look at in a Long time....I i Like Ya Vocab the was Nice ......Every thing bout it was tight....Peace Dawg (v)

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this was long as fuck but you made it well worth the time. I wass really feelin some of the ocncepts seen throughout this piece it was kinda bouncy as far as staying on one thought train but the randomness made it more catching to the eye to read it. The flow was way hot mice internals everywhere and killer multis in the right places. the rhyme scheme was a bit scetchy in spots but overall the syllable counts matched up this was a nice piece I definately felt it-1

Thanks Uski N Eplicit. . 'preciate Ya'll Takin Time To Read It.

Spec- Check Ya PM's And Bitch Slapped Kid.

-Formula.

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u know what spec stfu. your useless. but anyways man this shit was great proply one of the longest things I've read but it was well worth it. your flow and structre was well intact, lotsa nice multi's and vocab and some good wordplay. and as for dynamics as in like the way u took the views from god and satan was sweet, loved the concept and the topic was dope don't see to many pieces like this. and for further note man sad to see ya leavin but good luck again bro. keep the shit real peace.

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^^ haha another gangtser