Battle Rules:

6 - 12
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

good luck playa

Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-17-06 at 07:25 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.


Win by forfeit

TheKid_Sense has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-06 01:52 PM.

chip has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-15-06 03:36 PM.

call me the efficient verbal assassin, murder u in 1 sentence/
from a distance, think u can take me, u really got some Kid_Sense/
i do it big lil homie, not braggin bought my wealth, but i could crush u wit my kid's cents//
don't matter who votin', or who see my name and might hate/
been in the bag since u accepted, don't just believe cuz i say/
this man got it in his title, he really is a light weight, so go ahead send the win my way//
don't believe what u hear 'bout me cause i'm way past the hype/
i'm not a hardware store cuz i give your wife the pipe/
and i'm not in the matrix, they call me Morpheus cuz even wit a short punch a long night//
befalls my foes, don't wanna go toe-to-toe/
even tho ur hoe gave u VD, still cum wit a sicker flow/
i'm back better than ever, ur boy chip, u already know//

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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ahh Keystyle..

First Off Your Poems Suck, Writtens Wack, No Hard Feelings I'm Just Tellin The Truth,
So You Know What, Dropping A Mixtape? Nah, Real Advice, Don't Ever Step in the Booth,
It's Fair Luck, Battling You Is A Win Easily So Don't Even Dare Cuz You'll Get Teared Up,
Torn Apart, Chip's Black? Shit From His Pics He Look Like Osama With A Slight Hair Cut,
Thinkin You Hot In Battles, Not Yet You Ass Man Every Thing You Say Is A Joke,
Aint Even Dropped Yet And he All In The Chat Makin Threads To Try To Sway Him some Votes,
Plus Your Poems Show No Emotions So Think Twice Before You Post Em,
I'm not Jokin, Cuz Honestly If You Go Through With This Battle I'll Rip You Open,
Stop Bitchin, Matter Fact You Can't See Me So In No Way Can You Beat Me,
So When You Finish Ya Rap, Highlight It All, And Hit The Delete Key...
It's that Easy...

1...

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

Voted For: TheKid_Sense

whew!! Tha boy Kid_sense killed this one...overall, this was a one sided battle. Kid sense took it in every shape, form and fashion.

Chip-I could tell you got a lil skillz, but ya bars aint there yet. First off, the structure of your verse just looks off. Look at kid_sense, then look at yours. That says a lot about a battle. I know it may not seem like it but it does. Also, another big thing about a battle is the opener. The opener says alot about how ur verse is gunna be and rather or not the reader should take his time to finish reading ur verse or not. U should always have a clever and interesting/funny opener. ALWAYS! ur opener didn't even rhyme. I think u were tryna get there...u were on the right track, dissing him and all...but once again, u fell kinda short. No hate tho. What I wasn't feeling about ur verse was just the lack of interest I had in it. It was boring, it was stretched, so alot of things didn't make a lick of sense. Keep coming with them personals tho, u'll get there with that...but in this one, I felt ur challenger came off way to hard for you....

Kid_Sense- yea...you took this one, but you can't win em all like this. Even though you did have a better verse, you always gotta step your game up, cause theirs always better competitors out there then you. Unless you Hov' or something, but that's a different story...lol...But, I like how you stayed consistent throughout ur verse. You started off hard and you stayed that way. Another thing I noticed you did different then your competitor, was you stayed with the same flow style...U had a good opener...fell off just a lil bit, but still picked it back up with the last bar. I could tell this one was easy for you. But, one thing you need to work on is harder hitting personals. In a text battle, or any kind of battle, personals win it for you. Just come harder than that and I can see you'll be alot better.

Overall-Like i said, kidsense took this one hands down. More creativity...better style, and harder hitting personals. Ya'll both got skillz, just not using em right. Just keep coming strong and elevate...


-Eazy

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Whoa Chip Kinda Forgot About this..lol...wonder how...

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iGhostwrite Mixtape DL

lol, naw, just thought there'd be more than 1 vote after this much time... uppin 4 votes and honest critique...

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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.... still no more votes... weird how one came so fast and now there aren't any come on ppl, i'll rtf when i can, just ppep this....

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

wtf... uppin to the top...

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

Voted For: TheKid_Sense

this is a weak battle.

closer comparism's.

even tho ur hoe gave u VD, still cum wit a sicker flow/
i'm back better than ever, ur boy chip, u already know//

vs

Stop Bitchin, Matter Fact You Can't See Me So In No Way Can You Beat Me,
So When You Finish Ya Rap, Highlight It All, And Hit The Delete Key...


shows evidence of who came more creative. Both of you have stretched lines like fuck!
Punches arent anything great from both, but kid sense edged it on this one.
overall, both need to try be more creative.

decent battle

??? confused at both vote explantaions so far... not sweatin u tho, just don't really get it... uppin for more tho....

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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
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Voted For: TheKid_Sense

both u niggaz is wak man. no real punches at all. just fillers and played shit over and over again. some of ur lines dont even rhyme. I was gonna actually vote at first but damn. u too definetly let me down man. elevate.

Feedback removed

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..

sorry get that shit changed to feedback rather then a vote. I was in such a rush to get out off the wak battle that I just pressed anything.lol.

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..